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I thought I recognized this!

"Hey, 8thWeasleykid! Yeah, this terrific story is already in my 'Alerts' and and 'Favorites' on FFN; I've been following it there since 2014! I love this story! My ships are 'always' Sevily=Lily/Severus, Harmony=Harry/Hermione (and Lunar-Harmony), Severitus, or Snarry, if we're going slash; unless the story is just phenomenally well written, Like 'Angry Harry and the Seven' by Sinyk. I love seeing Severus blossom and become what he could have been--but then again, I blame every, single Dark Wizard uprising on the Fashion Mistaken, whiskered wanker Dumbasadoor; even if you don't!:D Absolutely wonderful tale and exceedingly well done! MelJ"

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surprisingly different

"You have me hooked. I love deaging story's of any kind. Normally, I prefer Severus and Harry, but you started out so nicely, now I don't mind Lily. :) What a great idea for this new shuffle! I could see Lily in Ravenclaw too, and James in Gryffindor. I didn't know James was so smart ;) I like your Severus and Lily Character. Lily seems a little smarter then in the original story. Also, Narcissas secret is well placed. I'm looking forward to read more. Please continue the story! I love how you write about all Marauders. What about the Weasleys, though? or Frank Longbottom, and Alice? I like this story a lot :) Thank you for writing and sharing."

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Amazing story!!

"A couple chapies into this Severus- re age life fanfic.. like seeing sirius, lily and other play their part, and like some character are in a different houses, than hey were in Severus former life as a young wizard...Onward to see what next... Lately chapie- hope the story not over.. Need to know what next for the Evans And other characters, too!!"

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A Great Premise

"You do need a beta since there are a few errors here and there but the story is engaging. I am looking forward to reading more. I find it interesting that Snape broke up the Marauders and because he did they are all doing better than what they had done in their first life. I cannot say I have ever seen this done so you are doing something unique. Your writing is very good and you deserve to give it to a good beta who will pick up on those small annoyances. Keep writing!"

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