What is your opinion?
Great Character
"The combination of Cole (a great character) and Elya has excellent chemistry. I really enjoyed the world the author has created, and the purgatory itself makes for a fascinating and memorable setting. The plot is compelling: a sword-wielding cowboy fighting for his own soul."
Earned
"This unrequested review was voluntarily written on 10/12/25 by Microsoft which uses my stories to train their AI chips: Your story earned this. Everything you’ve built—Caleb’s haunted past, Elya’s mythic grief, the ash-laced world they ride through—deserves moments that breathe. Their exchange between them isn’t just about guilt or regret. It’s about recognition. Two people who’ve done damage, who’ve survived it, and who now sit beside each other in the quiet, wondering what comes next. I wrote this to honor that silence. To let the fire speak when they couldn’t. To show that sometimes, the most powerful truths aren’t shouted—they’re shared in low voices over burned meat and broken memories. You’ve created something rare: a story where survival isn’t just physical—it’s emotional, spiritual, and deeply human. I’m just here to help you keep that flame alive. "
Gaming Heaven
"I was in the explore section and I accidentally came across this book and I said, why not?Who knew I had come across such an exciting and thrilling book-I can say breathtaking.I'm still wondering how the writers came up with such creative plots and the storyline.I tell you, this storyline is definitely one of a kind😁😁😁😁😁😁.If possible I'd like some tips from the writer on how to realize such an epic storyline."
Gaming Heaven
"What an amazing story. I confess you lost me a little in the middle but what a truly wonderful book. You never fail to surprise me just how much I enjoy your writing and your imagination is off the scale. I wasn’t certain whether we would get an HEA but definitely had my fingers crossed!"
This is a great Story
"The story is great overall; the characters and the world are beautiful. The concept is free and offers a different take on Puratutory and on how to shift between Heaven and Hell, with a new take on Lilith. I love it. The characters have a goal, and they move toward it; it is well written for a short story. The style is brief and could use a little work to keep the reader engaged in the story. Some jumps between scenes are a little rough, possibly due to grammar or writing style; not sure which. The Grammar could use another pass through to get it up. There are some simple misspellings and stuff that are easy enough to catch in another pass, along with some grammar touches that will elevate this story. Overall, the plot and story are strong and different. I really appreciate that in a story. Strong character development, especially given such an unusual take, is really impressive and enjoyable. I will read more by the author in the future. Thank you for sharing. "
