Microcuentos by joel at Inkitt
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Microcuentos

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Summary

Microrrelatos de la vida y sus circunstancias. Microhistorias del mundo. Escritos cortos llenos de filosofía, de aventuras, de paisajes, de cosas comunes

Genre
Other
Author
joel
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
23
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

La Picúa

La picua surca velozmente las aguas picadas del golfo, divisa su presa, da vueltas alrededor de ella y luego la caza y devora; pero tiene que moverse rápido y acercarse a la costa rocosa de Los Monjes porque a él lo está cazando el delfín. Los peces siempre tienen una presa a la que cazan y tienen un depredador que los caza a ellos. Cerca de la isla, la picua merodea las rocas en busca de más alimento, pero aquí escasea lo que ella necesita; por lo que nuevamente va mar adentro, nadando en el fondo marino para evitar delfines; divisa su alimento metido en un objeto desconocido por ella, siguiendo su estilo le da vueltas y luego, rauda y veloz, atrapa su presa sin saber que los pescadores de nasa la acaban de atrapar en su jaula. Ahora ella será cocinada con salsa de langostinos o graten de papas en alguno de los restaurantes gourmet de Punto Fijo 

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