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This is awesome

"I absolutely loved this. So much. I have no words. Everything is top notch. Writing style, grammar, and concept. I only have one problem with the plot, which is that the Alphites are in lunar orbit, and yet no one noticed the floating city in space. If there's one thing I know about NASA and the like, it's that they always have an eye on everything close to them in space. Aside from that, this is an awesome book."

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Love it

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Futuristic

"This futuristic story left me in awe. It is thrilling, exciting, but that is not its best trait. The most amazing thing about this story is that it is deep; it makes you wonder about certain things and raises some questions. I was amazed with this “madman” as you called him in your summary and with his astonishing but dangerous invention. However, the story gets more complicated Chapter through Chapter and there are a lot more things to worry about than I could have imagined. Your style of writing is great, sophisticated, but smooth, easy to read and sort of addictive. I was also surprised, but in a good way, with your choice of words in some situations and I really must commend your perfect language. This is what makes this story even more serious and which makes you stand out as an author. I also love how the story left me puzzled and ended in a cliffhanger. It simply made me want to read more. A great story!"

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Well done

"I admire your creativity. You have written a great piece. I want to promote your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is alright by you then please email me at cbdoungd876 AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks."

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