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feralquill

"You have a flowing readable style and like the pool of blood gathering beneath Lionel the plot has thickened just enough that I will take up your generous offer and read the rest when I have a chance. Oh,and Yes Wayne, it has been my experience that most Bullies when confronted have two feline traits. They turn into little kitties that can run like a cheetah. Good Luck with this contest."

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