What is your opinion?
So far I’m hooked
"I finished the book it was so good. I hated when I had to stop reading. It wasn’t hard to get into it he characters. This book is a keeper. Loved it The writer did a great job "
Love Grows
"I am always happy to read a love story. I do have a little issue about so much violence but happy that love overcomes it."
Under His Control
"Update please I loved the story so far great work author 👍👍👍👍👍"
Nice
"It's a story about two people getting connected due to their parents getting married to each other. But then they realize they cannot withhold their love just because they are step siblings. A little drama, but love conquers everything. Thanks author "
This is an interesting story.
"I enjoyed the concept but the characters lacked a little complexity. I would have liked more sensory input from them. More depth of feeling. Everything felt very surface level. The storyline felt a little choppy and inconsistent at times. But I think perhaps the layout of the dialogue impacted it for me. That's just a cultural difference so no complaints. I think as a first draft this has some potential to be developed into a cracking story. "
Waiting to see how their relationship will contonue
"I really want to see how the author will display the future of the protagonist couple "
Should soften some scenes
"Too aggressive "
