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Before we fade

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Summary

A guy seeking to break out of his normalcy, chances upon his ex-girlfriend at the beach where a wave of familiarity rushes in and fades away leaving them longing for more.

Genre
Romance
Author
Kavin
Status
Complete
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Early sight


Besant, in the morning.

It was him.

Tara isn’t sure at first, but she realizes it was him.

She was walking by the beach, she slows down after she sees him. She continues to look at him as he walks towards her.

She feels a rush in her heart. She didn’t know if she wanted to make her presence known to him, or just quietly slip away.

A gentle breeze grazes by.

She moves her head down, and tries to avoid being caught in his sight.

There was a guy walking with her. She turns and tells him something. (inaudible)

The guy nods and walks away.

She moves her eyes down, still split about stepping forward and crossing paths with him.

She lingers a moment, then looks up at him again.

Her heart was still racing.

She keeps looking at him, wondering if he would notice her.

But he doesn’t.





Title card:

BEFORE WE FADE





(Opening credits fade in with shots of the beach and the life it holds

-The sea and the sand

-Waves fading away

-Dogs living cozy in the warmth of the sand

-Flocks of pigeons flying around

-Crabs rushing into their holes when the wave hits)

(Light music plays from the beginning – Do listen for the vibe)

Similar, but less happy -

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lkPI-45gxBw

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