The Way We Feel by Louisgirll_28 at Inkitt
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The Way We Feel

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Summary

A Poem about the way we might feel or we are feeling rn a poem which can give us a clarity maybe?

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 3 reviews
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

The way we feel;

the way we do things; the way we gradually change;

The way we adore someone;

The way the stars adore the moon;

The way the moon adores the sun;

The feeling when it is sunset;

The way the sun sets so beautifullyโ€”

Telling us how we can let go;

The feeling of sunrise;

The way the sun rises so beautifullyโ€”

Telling us how we can start something;

the feel of a change;

The feeling of adoring;

The way we feel when we look at the sun, moon, and the stars;

The way the stars keep yearning for the moon.

The selflessness of the moon for the sun.

The way we keep on shifting;

The way Peter adores Wendy.

The way he is unrequited;

The way Wendy gazes;

the feeling of letting downโ€”

But the feeling of being stronger, and ourselves.

The way we transmit ourselves;

The way we adore ourselves.

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Your writing is absolutely fantastic powerful, emotional, and deeply moving. Itโ€™s the kind of work that deserves to be seen by more eyes, beyond this space. There's a massive platform one that turns stories like yours into monthly streams of passive income. if you're open to something biggerโ€ฆ Iโ€™d love to show you whatโ€™s possible.

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