Oscar pelea el campeonato mientras intenta mantener su relación amorosa aflote. Patricio se frustra por no demostrar todo su potencial mientras cada día se siente perdido en una relación que siente que solo él mantiene de pie. - Patoscar. - Único ship, aunque hay mención a otros.
Holaaa!
Es un One Shot, algo corto que se me ocurrió después de la carrera de Silverstone.
- Hay modificación en la agenda de las carreras para que haya más coherencia.
- Patoscar como único ship.
- Modificación en horarios para una mejor adaptabilidad de la historia.
- Modificación en la estatura de los personajes.
Eso es todo baiiiis. Las tqm.
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