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Happiness is a Small-Town Party Clown

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Summary

Poetry- your happiness is a clown

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

"Happiness is a small-town party clown"

Doped up on Mollie and Crown Apple.

Too late for him to be as good as Nate Bargatze’s Dad,

This clown is a father,

Who’s own children

Are alcoholics

And bitches.


“Happiness is a clown from a big city”

Hopping up and down on the broken glass

With his Big Mac boots,

Ripping through their b-day wrappings

And holiday ribbon scraps.


Happiness is a dead clown.

Too stunned to speak,

jacked up on cocaine

And Claritin, the

Pale-faced bitch

Sneezes off his burgundy nose,

And watches the other children

through the slit in the door.


Yes indeed, your happiness is a clown.

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