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História muito boa.

"Curti muito essa história, o autor escreve super bem e sabe deixar a gente ansioso pelo que vem por aí. Acho que ele podia ter trabalhado um pouco melhor os personagens secundários e o ambiente a sua volta, mas entendo por que não fez isso nessa história em específico."

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Excelente historia

"Aunque no estoy de acuerdo con el final, es bueno saber que hay 2da y 3ra parte..."

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Super!!!

"Exactement ce qu'on attend d'une lecture érotique!!! J'ai adorée et j'ai hâte de lire la suite, bravo et merci pour ce partage épicé ! "

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Me encanto

"Te envuelve está historia "

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Amazing escalation

"The author really knows how to build the tension up."

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Spicy Dare

"First off I'd like to say I loved this story, however, I have a few statements. 1st, idk how I feel about the whole situation with them being actual brother n sister. Not judging js. 2nd u should have all 3 books on same forum, that's just a tease. 3rd I've done a great job with the writing that one could really imagine the sights ur describing. Great job. "

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Spicy dare

"This is soooo hot!! I want more! Where are the other books??? I want to see what comes next!"

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Hot&Spicy

"Soo hot and spicy. Glad that I came across this book.❤️‍🔥"

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Very good

"Good story, like how it’s gradual. Extreme turn on . Can’t wait to keep reading "

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Loved!

"Such a tease! This was hot though! "

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My enjoyment

"I really enjoyed this actually to the point of orgasm several times"

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Spicy Dare

"Absolutely intriguing, erotic and fun to read"

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Great

"nice work, hope they go for a threesome soon..."

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Dare

"I love this book and i got upset when there wasn't a 2nd book and i hope its coming out soon. I thought the story was very interesting to read and i was confused at first but i got hooked to it, i read the whole story in 1 hour "

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DARE

"The author keeps you reading. Keeps you curious and wanting more."

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Mentre leggevo, credevo di essere lì con loro!

"Leggendo questa storia, non ho badato alla grammatica, sinceramente, anche perché l'ho letta facendo la traduzione con il pc in Italiano. Per quanto mi riguarda, mentre lo leggevo, l'unica cosa che pensavo è stata: sembra di essere lì con loro! Il modo in cui è scritto, ti fa immaginare ogni momento della storia, dei personaggi, quindi per me è fantastico questo! non è questo l'intento di chi scrive? Far appassionare chi legge, immaginando e immedesimandosi? Sul contenuto si può essere d'accordo o meno, ma sono questioni personali. Ma dato che scrivere rientra in una forma artistica, non dico che tutto è lecito, per carità, ma essere liberi di scrivere è positivo per tutti. Quindi grazie! E sul fatto di avere il resto del contenuto a pagamento, credo che essendo un lavoro duro, le persone passano molto tempo per farlo e renderlo piacevole a chi legge, trovo giusto che sia così. "

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Spicy dare

"The storyline and the anticipation of how far the siblings will go "

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Like how detailed the story was, my friends, because the story worth it

"Like how detailed the story was, my friends, because the story worth it"

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Cool work

"Personal I thought the writing was great and I found the characters believable and interesting , this is what I have to say, good work and I will read you later"

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Spicy

"I was a little unsure about this book but upset that I can’t find the 2nd book to finish the story!"

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