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The Moon and The Vale

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Summary

Addie Vale never believed in fate. Or magic. Or the way one look from the wrong man could unravel her entire world. When a mysterious opportunity brings her to Scotland, Addie finds herself drawn to Lochlain — powerful, guarded, and hiding something ancient beneath his calm exterior. The connection between them is immediate, dangerous, and impossible to ignore. But Addie doesn’t know who she really is. And Lochlain knows exactly what she is. As old magic stirs and hidden realms begin to wake, one truth becomes unavoidable: some bonds are written long before we are ready to claim them. The Moon and the Vale is a romantic fantasy filled with fated mates, hidden magic, and a love strong enough to change the balance of worlds.

Status
Excerpt
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

The world blurred past in a wash of silver mist and wild green.

Addie Vale pressed her forehead to the cool window of the car and watched the Scottish Highlands breathe — hills rising like sleeping giants beneath a sky the color of old pewter. Rain whispered against the glass, chasing itself in thin, uncertain lines. She should have been reading or sleeping, but something about the landscape refused to let her look away.

It felt ancient.

Alive.

Watching.

The driver — an older man with gentle hands and a burr in his voice that could sand wood smooth — caught her eye in the mirror. “Nearly there, miss,” he said. “Another mile or so.”

Addie smiled faintly, though her heart thudded hard against her ribs. She’d spent most of her twenty-five years keeping her head down — working, studying, scraping by. A month-long study trip to Scotland, all expenses paid, felt like something that happened to other people. Certainly not to a graduate student juggling two part-time jobs and an unfinished thesis.

She tucked a strand of hair behind her ear. “Right. Nearly there.”

The road curved around a bend, and she caught her first glimpse of it — the Dunraven.

It wasn’t a hotel.

It was a castle pretending to be one.

Stone walls climbed like memory itself, turrets crowned with slate the color of storm clouds. Ivy trailed up its sides in green ribbons, and the building seemed to rise straight out of the mist, its many windows glowing like watchful eyes.

Addie’s breath caught. “Oh.”

The driver smiled. “Aye. Gets that reaction from most.”

She glanced down at her reflection in the glass — faded jeans, an old wool coat, scuffed boots. She felt like a child playing dress-up in a world too fine for her. There had to be a mistake.

“You’re certain,” she asked softly, “that I’m supposed to be here?”

He nodded as he turned into the long gravel drive, where the air shimmered faintly, as though even the rain bowed to the gates. “Name’s on the list, Miss Vale. You’re right where you’re meant to be.”

The words prickled over her skin.

Meant to be.

They stopped beneath a portico carved with curling vines and winged creatures. The doors swung open before she reached them, and a rush of warm, herb-scented air enveloped her.

Inside, the lobby glowed with lamplight. Stone floors shone like water beneath an immense chandelier dripping with crystal. Vases of white flowers stood on polished tables — lilies, roses, and something faintly shimmering she couldn’t quite name. The scent was clean, cool, and strangely familiar.

Addie froze just past the threshold. Everything was too beautiful, too grand. She half expected someone to appear and ask what a girl like her was doing here.

Instead, a woman behind the check-in desk smiled warmly. “Welcome to the Dunraven, Miss Vale. We’ve been expecting you.”

“Expecting—?” Addie began, but the words caught. The woman’s voice carried a soft lilt, like wind through chimes.

She slid a small envelope across the counter. “Your suite is prepared. The staff have already arranged for your luggage. Breakfast is served until ten, and you’ll find tea waiting in your room.”

Addie frowned at the elegant card inside — her name written in looping gold ink. “There’s really no mistake?”

The woman’s eyes sparkled. “None at all. Enjoy your stay.”

Addie followed a bellman down a hushed hallway lined with portraits whose painted eyes seemed to follow her. The corridor bent and climbed, leading to a tall white door marked 407. The bellman opened it and stepped aside.

She froze.

The room looked like something out of a dream — warm gold and soft cream, light pooling across polished floors. A massive bed piled with white bedding dominated the space, the duvet so plush it seemed to glow. Floor-to-ceiling windows opened onto a view of mist rolling over the loch below, the surface shifting like liquid silver.

Addie took a hesitant step inside. The air smelled faintly of jasmine and linen. A vase of white flowers — roses and something more delicate — sat on the bedside table beside a folded note written in graceful gold script.

Welcome home.

Her heart skipped.

Home.

No one had used that word for her since the orphanage.

A small, breathless laugh escaped her. “You’ve officially lost it, Addie.”

She dropped her bag by the door and ran her fingertips over the duvet, which felt like the soft belly of a cloud. Beyond, an open doorway revealed a marble bathroom, where a freestanding tub gleamed like a promise.

For a long moment, she simply stood there — caught between wonder and disbelief. Then, slowly, she exhaled.

“Well,” she whispered, “when in Scotland…”

She ran a bath, steam curling through the room as she poured in the provided salts — lavender and something wilder. She soaked until her thoughts drifted and her skin flushed pink.

Later, wearing her old, faded blue flannel pajamas and wrapped in a thick white robe, she padded barefoot onto the balcony with a cup of tea. The night air was cool and damp against her cheeks. Below, the loch shimmered beneath a rising moon. Somewhere in the distance, an owl called, its voice echoing through the mist.

Addie smiled softly, tugging the robe closer. “This place is magic,” she murmured — unaware how true that was.

Behind her, the curtains stirred, though the air was still. The scent of the flowers deepened, sweet and sharp as memory.

Far away, beyond the mist and stone, something ancient stirred…

…and took notice.

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