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Intense and emotional

"I'd start telling I cried so much at the end. This book really left me crying my heart out. A cheff kiss for the author who wrote this story as it is for if it was me I'd chicken out before writting the final chapters. Mara's character is one of strong woman. Even at the face of Tragedy and Trauma she stood strong. The pains she endured are endless. That place really had no mercy to offer her and when ultimately the one she placed her trust in that crucial moment betrays her in the worst possible way,she lost everything in her will to continue. Her mutiliated womb with the baby in it absolutely broke me. I think the moment she felt she lost it,is the moment she realised there is nothing for her. The emperor is too late,when he finally understood what she means to him,there is no she. The devastation,anger,pain,hopelessness,they all felt soo real. I absolutely loved and cried reading this book. Soo good.❤️"

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So far... Great!

"I cannot wait to keep reading more 🥳. This is definitely a dark story that I am looking foward to finishing! "

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Tragic

"Losing yourself is easy. You suck it up, and try to move on. Losing love is hard. You try to numb the pain, and if you're lucky it works. But losing hope...what do you do when there's literally nothing left to hope for? This is a story of loss. Not just one loss, but the continual dismantling of hope being chipped away one trauma at a time. It will leave you hollowed out and aching."

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The Emperors Gift

"Before I write anything 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 This story has my emotions wrung tightly. All shades of emotions flow through me reading it. Anger, bewilderment, pain, emptiness, empathy etc I think I felt them all. To think humans are culpable in sending their females there! I wish Juliet and Louise will tell Maras family what happened to her so that they can at least get closure - though not details of the horrors she lives. The death of Makaila and that wicked general wasn’t painful enough for me. Mehn! This is such a strong work It’s not for the weak Will definitely read more of your works"

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Tragedy

"Spoiler: Not a story for people looking for the happy ending or rebellion arc like the back page description suggests. There is no romance, it is all just a masterclass in horrible things happening to one person. Needs more trigger warnings. Great plot premise, but absolutely not executed. "

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