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La treizième porte

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Summary

Noha ouvre la treizième porte interdit du pensiona. Derrière le fantôme d’Elina. Morte et vengersse, l’attend...pour ne laisser aucun survivant .

Status
Complete
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

Il y avaits 13 porte dans le couloires du vieux pensiona Saint-Maur. Douze d’entre elle menait a des chambre vide , oubliées par le temps . La treizième au bous du couloire , etais condamner depuis 40 ans .

Personne n'en parlais . Personne n’ossait même la regarder trop longtemps . On racontais que une élève , Elina Mourier y avaits été enfermée tout une nuits ...et quelle en nes jamais ressortie . Le lendemain ces camarade l’avais retrouver enventrer , le visage figer dans une grimace de terreurs. Depuis se jours la porte resstais seler ,coulier , murer effacer des registres.

Mmais Noha , lui ni croyer pas . Arriver du pensiona depuis que 2 semaine , trouvais ces histoire ( bonne pour des enfant ) . Une nuits il a voulus verifier par lui même .

Il attenda que tout le monde dorme , il alluma sa lampe torche et monta au dernier étage.

Arriver au couloire interdit , il sentie un froid brutal s’emparer de lui . L’aire etais glaciale . Comme si la porte respirait la mort .

Et pourtant la treizième porte n’etais pas murer elle etais entrouverte

" ces une blague "murmuras Noha en avancent.

A l’intérieur il ne voiyais qu’une piece sombre, tapiser de miroire fendus et de mure noircie par le feu . Mais des qu’il posa un pied dans la salle ...la porte se refairma brutalement derrière lui .

Et dans le reflais du miroire elle etais la .

Une silhouette de jeune fille, sans yeux , les orbites noire comme le font d’un puits , sa robe blanche tacher de sans séché . Elle tendie sa main vers les main de Noha ...et murmuras :

"Pourquoi ma tu oublier "

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