Inkitt
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Coming Home

"It was a beautiful story ❤️"

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Coming home

"I really love this story and I hope to read your next one about this bunch of great people and beautiful place! Wonderful book, Author!"

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Second chance

"I’m glad that they are getting their second chance at true love. Had tears during the rose garden scene. True love always wins ❤️"

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Hot! 5 STARS! Beautiful and well written story!

"The talk 2- was hard for me. Had to deal with a lot of loss in my life. My stepbrother 2018, my dad in 2020 and my baby sister in 2022. All of that came crashing down on me at one time. It’s like no matter how strong you try to be a single thought can send you down a very emotional path! I’m glad that back at the Azure club brought a little lightness and laughter to the chapter before. And a whole lot of spicy!"

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Coming Home

"I read this story before and I wasn’t sure about doing a repeat, but this is hands down one of my favorite stories. I’m glad that I am reading this story again. It still feels new. "

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writing skills

"I really enjoyed this chapter the writing was engaging and the characters came across with so much heart"

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Read it

"This story connects in chapter one. Get hooked to this story there are some twists and turns early. The story line and characters are great very well written! "

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Amazing

"I love this book. The originality and style had me hooked back when the book was on Chapters. "

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So good

"I love this story. It is so sweet and frustrating. They love each other, and it is so obvious you all love each other."

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