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Completely original and great

"I know I'm the author, but it's great. A great book"

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Superpowers are just the best!

"Great work so far. Just keep writing. The plot is an intriguing one, that's for sure. "

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Liked it

"For a kids book I thought it was really good. I noticed there was a misspelled word it’s moron not Moran. Hope this helps! "

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Interesting Plot

"This story has a very interesting plot, and it does seem fast paced, as expected of a superhero novel. The characters are amusing, though Jake was introduced a bit too late in the story. Apart from that, I liked the plot, and how there seems to be more running behind the fighting scenes. With some improvement and fine tuning, this book will become harder to put down until the end. "

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this is the most ahh book ever

"this is the most ai generated slop i have ever read"

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