Chapter 1
Ava's pov:
Ava went to school end as always she would see her crush Jake a 15 Year and of course ava was a 13 year old. Her best friend Lily always said isn't he to old for you? and as always ava said pfffft age is just a number.Lily just Quietly said um okay... Jake came by and Jake said hi. Ava nervously said hh...i back Ava then miraculously fainted to the ground. Jake Saw and came running to her. He carries her and said bring the MEDIC!! When she woke up she was in the hospital and Jake was with her Ava looks to Jake.
Ava then blushes The doctor said she has now a problem she can't live alone for her whole life because she could faint a lot and that is a thing called faintamadics Ava said but I live alone. Jake said do you want to move in with me. of course Jake lived alone. Ava said am I dreaming 🫣.
Ava moved in luckily she had her own room. Ava then said eww 🤢 it stinks in here I would rather sleep in the teachers room Jake said that he never used this room.clearly he was lying Ava wanted to move out directly. Jake said umm hi is everything thing ok in here Ava lied she said Yes and this was her face when she said that🙄.
Lily called ava... Ava answers the phone 📱 Oh hi lily how are u. lily answers good and you ava say's good do you want to go to the movies with me Lily say's sure. Ava than hangs up📱.Jake storms in the room and yells Are u Ok!😨 Ava said yes yes... What is wrong with u Jake says I thought 🧐 I heard you scream ava said I dit not scream?
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The story base line is good but May I ask, are you a kid? Because there are grammatical errors and punctuation mistakes and you’ve converged what was supposed to be about 3 chapters into one, nonetheless it’s good 😊