Chapter 1
Awekening
Life energy
Indicator of the beautiful
Signal of the end
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Awekening
Life energy
Indicator of the beautiful
Signal of the end
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Fiona Walker: First of all I have to say that I really enjoyed this short story. I did find the single line paragraphs a little uncomfortable to read as it didn’t flow but the content was amusing and sweet. For me, the ending didn’t feel like an ending, it just stopped. I understand the implication of the final c...
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Siandial: I love this. Great story. I'm loving your books.
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Alice : its great but missing some things still best storyloved it
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Elle Petra: I really enjoyed reading about these characters from the outset. The concept is great, and well-executed. Toward the end of the story I found it difficult to continue to relate to the FMC, to the point where I didn't really hope the main characters would end up together. But this is likely just down...
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Fiona Walker: What a wonderfully brilliant story. As always, really well written and edited with a great storyline, it seems there’s no genre this really talented author can’t write! All the characters are really likeable even poor wet Cameron lol and the sub story is one I’d really like to read *hint hint*I hav...
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Jolly Jam: Although I find the idea of a super woman that cooks a little stereotypical. That said, I enjoy the witty conversations and comebacks
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Alexandra: I would have liked to have seen a talk on marriage and possibly a proposal. But even with out it this is a well written piece with a lot of heart.The only thing that got slightly annoying was the repetition of words and phrases. It felt like repeating scenes with the same emotions rather than the ne...
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