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Enjoyable

"Great slow burn "

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Such

"A sweet book. Heartwarming, great characters, charming storyline. Loved it! <3"

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Cool

"J’ai trop adoré bravo "

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Claimed

"Eine ganz wundervolle Geschichte. Vielen Dank dafür ❤️"

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Claimed..

"Y'all it was so good! Thanks author!;👌 "

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Wonderful!!!

"This story had it all. Friendship, drama, fear, love, and laughter. I hope to see a second novel with Liv and Ryan’s story! "

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❤️🩶

"Absolutely perfect! What more can I say?"

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I love it

"The ending really move me, i have soft spot for a father who cherish his new born"

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OMGEEE

"This story brought me to tears, this was everything "

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Claimed

"what a nice story its really awesome , I really loved it, its heartwarming,suspense ,good writting and above all its a perfect story.thank you dear author."

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Raw, passionate and beautiful love story

"Loved this! Drawn in throughout the whole book. Beautifully written. Spicy, raw, passionate and sweet. Great characters with strong personalities and strong dialogue. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Thank you for sharing it with us ❤"

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You made me cry

"So good. Just the right amount of tension and suspense. The external issues they fought together pulling them closer... I loved it."

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Spellbound.

"A real page turner. Perfect blend of romance and intrigue like I haven't read in a long time. A few gaps in the storyline - especially with some characters entering the scene and no indication of them leaving, but flawless otherwise. Ending felt a bit rushed too."

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Well composed

"I enjoyed the story! The forbidden feeling of their connection. The development of the characters feeling until the brak of control. I did however lose a bit of interest when they finally gave into their emotions as I was enjoying the restraint and the angst. Over all this story is pretty well written with good details. "

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Great Story!

"I loved the overall plot of the story, although some parts were a bit repetitive, the way things came together in the end was lovely!!💗 "

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want more!!

"so happy cammie and luke got to find their peace! there were some really sweet moments and very spicy ones too. the chapters were fairly short which made it easy to read and follow but the ending felt slightly rushed. like what happened with jason? with liv and ryan? i personally would’ve liked more background and insight about the characters in the past. like luke and ryan’s friendship, how luke came to meet cammie and his obsession grew, cammie’s past with jason outside of his abuse, ryan’s maybe overprotective nature. the heart of the story tho is luke’s undying devotion, loyalty, and love towards cammie and her growth of healing deep traumas from a past of abuse💘"

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