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"It's an interesting idea to have someone kill as a way of suicide. I wish the story had more emotion in it to give it a more sinister texture. There was a disconnect like I was watching it happen rather than I could feel it happening, I couldn't really understand what was going on with the character. If it was something mental I could have liked to have glimpses of an unstable mind rather than be outright informed.Nothing the less, I enjoyed it."

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