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Love the plot and World building!

"Not yet done with the book, but I love it so far! I'm curious about the cloaked man and his relationship with our FL. What does he truly seek? The author also perfectly describes our FL's trauma, fear, guilt and confusion. With all the things that she experienced, it's a surprise she hasn't given up yet. I'll also love to learn more about her powers. What type of people are blessed/cursed with them? I love it so far and will keep watching for the next updates. Can't wait to find out what happens next!"

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A Promising Start to a Dark Fantasy

"The story is still in its early stages, but the author has placed a strong hooking factor right at the beginning, which pulls readers in. I see real potential here. To me, it feels like the making of a true dark fantasy, and the background setup has been done really well."

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