SEGMENT ONE
as though cotton-wool-wrapped
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A collection of some of the poetry I have had published in journals and magazines.
as though cotton-wool-wrapped
Love this
Funny
Spicy
Suspenseful
Emotional
Profound
Heartwarming
Shocking
Good Writing
Compelling Plot
Great Character
Strong Dialog

mariedavismd312: This was Avery spiritual read. The last 2 chapters where very disappointing. That was such a let down unless there is a sequel. Burgess should have been punished for what he did. There was no explanation for his hatred for Jeremiah. I figured he was being set but just had the wrong person. I loved ...
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Kyle: Love it in all honesty. Slightly longer than I had assumed but it’s great. There’s just some conflicting words used in the story.
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Sophia: Hey!The tension between Gemma and Joseph feels very raw and personal, have you thought about how this dynamic might resonate with readers if you expanded the story into a longer ebook?
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Sophia: Hey Rujuta!Bethany’s obsession with Sunset Boulevard and her rituals feel so visual. Have you ever thought about explaining her 112th movie watch through illustration? I can imagine a comic panel showing her intense expressions and messy takeaway boxes.
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Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...
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Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...
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Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...
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Elouise33: I loved this short story. One spicy chapter was all it needed to leave me wanting more.
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