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GREAT STORY
"I like all the p o.vs like u didnt miss what was happening to each person/group I feel like the ending was rushed compared to the rest of the books detail. But I really loved this book and probably the best story I've read in awhile"
The perfect blend of fantasy/mc/drama🥰
"No other words other than perfection🤞🏻 i don’t want spoil it for others that haven’t read it yet but i 100% reccomend to anyone who’s scrolling through these reviews questioning whether or not they should. DO IT. I promise it wont disappoint! On another note... Author do you think you would ever consider writing another maybe a more short and compact story about Monkey? The way you have portrayed her even as a child just beg the question whether or not she would get her own story? Given that i have seen how much it took from you to get through this one and also currently working on Il Corvos Lupa Nera i can see how it could be hard but it would be soo amazing if you did one on Monkey and her future and maybe with something tied into is sister as well? Idkk just a suggestion(maybe slightly begging🤣) from a fan😁"
Très bien
"Très bonne histoire, on a bien envie que l'histoire continue. Mais ça c'est parce que je suis gourmande. Sinon c'est très bien 👍"
Well written, entertaining.
"Plot progresses well, story is well written, the interaction between characters is pretty good. Pretty enjoyable to read. "
Words cannot describe, but I’ll give it a try. ❤️
"Phenomenal story from page one! We have bikers, werewolves, dirty cops, the mafia, gangs. The pace is superb, a great mix of being both plot and character driven. It’s a delicate balance and Randi-Anne Dey dances between the two weaving them seamlessly to perfection. This is storytelling at its peak. This story is woven into the fabric of what could be reality, which is what makes it so believable and blurs the lines of fiction and reality. The cast of characters is incredible and you fall in love with all of our heroes and you despise the wicked ones. They are complex and full of life breathed within them by Randi-Ann Dey. We see their pain and trauma, their hopes and fears, their past, presents and futures in a way that makes them relatable, genuine people. All of this done with incredible talent because not once does the story feel overwhelming in those small details. It’s absolute perfection. Randi-Ann Dey is definitely an author to watch and will be added to my 2026 If she writes it, I read it list. Truly a brilliant talent to watch for. "
Amazing
"brilliant writing, great charters! "
Fantastic
"Absolutely brilliant book couldn’t put it down had me gripped from start to finish well done author 😀 "
Very impressed
"I have never found a book with 40 plus chapters that kept my interest. This book did. It just flowed"
Leather Legacy
"Loved they story line and characters.I couldn’t stop reading. Found myself up till early morning. I was hoping the writer would continue on another squeal. What happen with Conri. Even viper or Kenna’s. Showing what she turns into evil or nice. I would highly recommend this book. "
A very good read!
"If you enjoy an epic tale, you'll find yourself immediately drawn into this one. A real page-turner that has you rooting for the good guys and wanting to jump in and beat up the bad guys!"
Feed back on LEATHER AND LEAGACY
"The "Boredom" Meter & Pacing The Hook: Excellent. A barefoot kid in unicorn pajamas wandering into a biker/wolf den is an immediate "I need to know what happens next" moment. It’s a high-contrast image that works every time. The Drag: The middle of the scene at the bar starts to feel a bit "orderly." For a clubhouse full of "grizzled men," everyone falls into line and becomes helpful very quickly. It’s sweet, but it saps the tension. The Rushed Part: The transition from Adora arriving to Stone and the boys being on their bikes feels like it happens in about sixty seconds. We go from "cleaning her feet" to "full tactical briefing" very fast. I wanted to feel Stone’s internal rage simmer a bit more before he jumped into "Alpha mode." Character Reality Check Adora: She’s believable for the most part. The "It's not a dog, it's a unicorn" line was a highlight—it sounds like a real kid correcting an adult. However, she’s a bit too composed for a kid who just walked three miles on bleeding feet after seeing her mom beaten. I’d expect more shivering, more shock, or even her falling asleep mid-sentence from exhaustion. Stone: He feels like the quintessential "Rough Alpha with a Heart of Gold." It works, but it’s very predictable. His internal monologue at the bike ("burn the world trying") feels a bit like a book blurb. I’d love to see him show a flicker of real fear or uncertainty—he’s a big guy, he probably doesn't know how to handle a tiny girl, and that awkwardness would make him more human. Viper: She’s the "Cool Big Sister" figure. Her interaction with the bandages was the strongest part of the character work. It showed her competence without her having to act "tough." Dialogue & Voice The Good: "One, seven, eight, six." Using the address as a mantra is a great human touch. It gives the kid a mission. The Stiff: The tactical briefing at the end. Stone says: "If there is a car in the driveway, I will click the alarm fob twice. Two quick chirps, enough for you but not for the occupant in the house." This sounds like an instruction manual. The Fix: Real bikers/wolves in a hurry don't talk like that. He should just say: "Two chirps if there's a car. Rogue, you're on the locks. Tank, with me. Fang, watch the road." Keep it clipped. Logic & Consistency Issues The Three Miles: This is the biggest logic hurdle. A barefoot toddler (I'm assuming she's young based on "pink unicorn pajamas") walking three miles on gravel/dirt roads in the dark would take much longer than two hours, and her feet wouldn't just be "bleeding," they’d be shredded. The "Daddy" vs. "He": She calls him "Daddy" but then says "He should've minded his own business." It’s a small thing, but if she’s that young, she usually refers to parents as "him" or "her" less than "Daddy" or "Mommy." The Shift in Arms: There’s a confusing sentence: "Adora looks up at Tank standing nearby, who nods and steps away from Stone’s arms and into Viper’s arms." Wait—did Tank just step into Viper's arms? I think you meant Adora, but the way it's written makes it look like the giant biker Tank is being cradled by Viper. The World-Building You’ve dropped hints about "Wolves," "Pack-house," and "Alpha." It’s subtle enough that it doesn't feel like a data dump, which I appreciate. The "violet-eyed wolf" emblem is a nice touch. It tells us they aren't just a biker gang without hitting us over the head with a "History of Lycanthropy" lecture. Emotional Impact What Hit: The "Mommy pushed me out the window" line. That’s a punch to the gut. It paints the mother’s desperation perfectly. What Flatlined: The guys leaving the clubhouse. It felt a bit "Power Rangers"—everyone getting their assignments and nodding. It lacked the grit of a man who just saw a bloody child on his floor."
Checks all the boxes, great story!
"This story has everything I like when reading. Great characters, details about the present, backstories and a peak into the future. As the tale unfolds, I didn’t find myself questioning what was meant or what happened ... it’s well laid out and explained (without over explaining). It has the love story but isn’t over the top with XXX. The relationship builds nicely. Other side relationships as well. I really enjoyed this book and found myself reading WAY too late into the evenings -it’s that good. There’s a whole world here, and I loved how smoothly it was all tied together. Well done. "
One of the best books I've ever read. Absolutely loved it ❤️
"This book is absolutely amazing. I didn't want to read it at first because most long books get boring at some point but this book had me completely hooked. I love everything about this book, from beginning to end. I'm definitely going to read it again "
Awesome!!
"Such a terrific plot! So many twists that intertwined. Great characters and POVs. Kept me totally interested throughout the whole book! I usually like some spice, but this was totally amazing without any. Loved it!❤️"
Fantastic read
"Thank you for an amazing book!!! I could not put it down. You have an amazing writing talent. I look forward to reading more of your books!!!"
A must read
"Even though this book is long it's so worth it . It has everything!! I've hardly had any sleep because I just couldn't stop reading. Thank you author "
Love it
"Entschuldige, ich hoffe du kannst dir das hier übersetzen lassen. Allein die Idee kleines Mädchen, barfuß im Einhorneinteiler kommt in eine Biker Bar und bitte sie ihre Mommy zu retten. Ich habe dein Buch von der ersten Seite an geliebt! Die vielen Charakter und die Teile aus ihrer Perspektive haben sich perfekt eingefügt und waren nie störend, so dass ich sie nie überfliegen wollte. Und ich liebe diese Vermischung aus Fantasy, Mafia, Biker, Krimi. Das Buch ist so dick, aber ich habe mich nur daran erfreut und fand es nie langatmig oder zäh. Und dazu noch die vielen kleinen Details wie die Rabenoutfits, die Fluchkasse, die Tatortsicherung,... Ich fand es auch toll, dass du Joe und Monkey Zeit gegeben hast. Nicht das klischeehafte Gefährte taucht auf und boom ist alles Trauma vergessen. Auch die langsame Annäherung als Familie und als Paar war stimmig. Ich liebe es auch, dass es starke weibliche Charaktere gibt und der "Boss" sich für die Familie und deren Schutz zurück zieht und im Hintergrund agiert. Natürlich gibt es auch hier manchmal etwas zu perfekte Antworten, Handlungen, ... trotzdem bleibt es im Rahmen. Ich hätte mir zwar gewünscht, dass noch der ein oder andere Faden nicht so lose geblieben wäre, aber das ist Jammern auf hohem Niveau. Wichtig, wenn du deine Geschichte auf Deutsch verkaufen möchtest: du brauchst dringend jemand, der die Übersetzungsfehler korrigiert. Es wäre schade, wenn andere dein Werk deswegen nicht so beachten würden. Korrigiert werden sollte: - Geschlechter z.B. sind Knox und Viper mal männlich, mal weiblich - Dollar, es sollte dabei bleiben. Ein Kapitel lang waren es plötzlich Euros. Es gibt aber keine 1 Euro- Scheine - Papa, Papi, Daddy und das gleich auch bei Mommy, Mami,... Eine Bezeichnung sollte durchgehend sein. - Monkey auf dem Bike: macht sie die Geräusche "wuschwusch", "zoomzoom" oder soll es eigentlich immer das selbe sein? - Wenn es noch mehr gibt, fällt es mir gerade nicht ein. Was zum Glück richtig übersetzt wurde ist die Anrede mit du oder Sie. Vielen Dank für die tolle Geschichte und wenn sie auf Deutsch erscheinen sollte, werde ich sie mir definitiv kaufen! "
Leather and Lace
"Loved it, loved how you brought people together that wouldn't normally work together for a common cause. Beautifully written "
Will Be Buying Physical Book
"Most well written story on this app that I've read so far. I'll definitely be buying it in physical copy if a Hard Copy version comes out. Loved the story, the healing, and precious baby girl. Only wish was to have more to the ending. Too short! Maybe we can get an extra chapter of two? 🙈"
best ever
"BEST BOOK IVE READ SO FAR!!! Storyline, characters... PERFECT!! "
