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The promise of something special.

"Vitalis presents itself as an interesting proposition. It appears to feature a "hard magic" system, established right from the first chapter. What I like most about Vitalis is how it instantly sets itself apart from other works by taking the protagonist out of the typical magic school for children and placing her in a university setting. I’ll say it: adult problems are more interesting, and offer a skilled writer more to work with, than the issues that might affect children. I hope the author decides to continue this book."

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Vitalis

"I really hope there's more chapters coming soon, I mistakenly thought this was a completed story. The plot is interesting thus far so as an avid reader, I was gutted to hit a brick wall at only Chapter 4 🥺☹️🤦‍♀️"

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