Good start

"What I liked: Intriguing premise to this story. I like the idea of characters changing back and forth between human and animal. The characters have a strong potential for readers to care what happens. What I didn't like: The technical writing of this is too jarring. Author needs to work on sentence structure, grammar, punctuation, etc. The fight scenes need some tweaking to make them more immersive. Conclusion: If the technical aspects of this story are fixed, this has the potential of being a strong story. The Character's voice needs some tweaking. Maybe too focused on the physical aspects of love. If more emotion were added to show the connection between the protagonist and his lady love, it could add some real depth."