What is your opinion?
Kudos for writing such a masterpiece
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Needs some editing
"Let me preface by stating that this is only constructive criticism, and I have needed it for my own writing. No part of this is an attack by any means. That being said, the punctuation was very distracting. One of the biggest things I saw was the punctuation for dialogue. If someone says something and you put 'he said' after, there should be a comma and the 'h' in 'he' should be lower case, e.i: "The dragon went that way," he said. Another thing to watch out for is dialogue tags. They are fine to use, but not excessively. Also, due to the close-minded thinking of the protagonist, I had a difficult time relating to her and wanting to get further into her head. Perhaps if she has a supposedly good reason for her stances, you should state them earlier so as not to turn people off. I wish you the best of luck in your edits! Don't give up. Writing a book is a worthwhile marriage."
