What is your opinion?
Approvato
"I finished the first chapter in no time because the style is very flowing. In the story itself it's easy to identify with oneself and generally I don't find any significant flaws (perhaps the length of the chapters, but that would be hypocritical of me since I'm the first to write long stuff😅) (Would you like to check out the first chapter of my book and write a review if you like?) "
Good start!
"I like the concept of this story. It's a very interesting take that's not spoken about as much as it should. The only thing for me personally is too much dialogue, but overall, this is a good take."

