Hasta Aquí: La Brisa Fría by Moshhi at Inkitt
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Hasta aquí: la brisa fría

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Summary

La brisa transporta a nuevamente extrañar.

Genre
Poetry
Author
Moshhi
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Hasta aquí: la brisa fría

El primer objeto pequeño, al tacto, transporta al libre pensar;

que ya las verdes hojas tomaron tono naranjoso,

y que yo solo sigo esperando a la misma dama:

personaje que se fue con sensación de quizás volver.

Resurge la tranquilidad,

la esperanza que me daba con cada dulce palabra,

con tal emoción en el paladar,

que ni siquiera Dios podría chistar.

Igual los recuerdos,

que parecieran de algunos días,

aunque ya son del calor del sol,

de la caída de pétalos,

hasta aquí: la brisa fría,

la insensibilidad de la piel,

donde su recuerdo se presenta

cuando hace falta el calor del pretérito.

El pedido o el ruido desconcentran el trance

de manipular el objeto primero,

para seguir con la respuesta,

disimulando el viaje

y fingiendo estar...

sin ninguna soledad.

-moshhi

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