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Enjoying

"I like the style and curiosity it is developing. Would recommend to everyone "

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It was a great book to read

"Wowwww this book was awesome, I would love to share it to as many friends as I can. The plot, setting e.t.c was great I actually felt like I was in the book. I got a little sad when I taught they would never go back to velora fore. I couldn't stop myself from rating it 5 stars. It's really good keep up the good work."

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The magical secrets of the crystal kingdom

"The flow of the story was awesome.Rose was the best character of all 🥰🥰🥰"

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Great fun and profound Insight

"I believe that children need to learn about love and that love is who they truly are. And it is in an interesting fun book, that will keep children all of ages happy - including me!"

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The magic secret of the crystal kingdom

"I absolutely loved this book. Read it at every available moment. It’s well written and storyline keeps you captured and intrigued on the next event. Would definitely read more. I think other people should read it especially to their children as it creates wonderful imagery and will keep children and adults wanting to turn to the next page. "

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Loved this book!

"I really enjoyed this book! I felt that the characters had really interesting backgrounds and the story line made the book hard to put down! As someone who does not like to read, I found myself wanting to keep reading to find out what happened next! I think this would be a great book for a child who is looking to get into reading or maybe is uninterested in school reading and needs a good book. I love this book and would definitely recommend checking it out!"

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Abbie Rushbrooke

"Absolutely great! I usually not a fan of reading but I was sooooo interested to find out what happens next I read it in two days A magical and spell binding book for filling everyone's need. Would recommended giving this a book a read to everyone. Such a lovely story line showing you that people are still looking after you even though they not be visible."

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A great, compelling read

"Stellar narrative, excellent character development and a light-hearted journey. Highly recommended! Rose was a protagonist I saw in myself as a child, and supporting characters drove her warmth and energy. "

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One of the best childrens book i have read

"I very much enjoyed reading this book the second time. I would definitely recommend reading this book I gave it a second read and I was thrilled with the character style and story. I would say princess rose is my favorite character although all the characters are what I say awesome! I would say if I bought this book I would pay £15 pound I wish all children would read this story I would say I have read the harry potter story and lion the witch and the wardrobe but I would say this tops them both I know both of them stories have a high grossing selling and the fact that it is popular but I hope this book someday will be popular great work for P Nicholls for writing this. my favorite chapter would be the crystal towers at least that's what I think it was called I was so engrossed I forgot the chapters name so I would rate this book a 50 of 50 if they had that mark but it was very good please please give this a read..."

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A Great Read

"I was unsure how suitable this would be for my boys as they are only 4 and 6, but they have both really enjoyed it as their bedtime reading. What was even better was how easy it was to read outloud, somehow it just seemed to flow and lead itself to being read that way. Both boys loved all the characters and were really excited to hear what was going to happen next. Now just waiting to see if a sequel comes out."

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Dreams are magical

"I love how this book starts with the vivid dreams and the story progresses wonderfully. A great read for children of all ages. Will be reading this to my son and I am sure he will love it too. Hope there is a sequel to follow."

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The Magical Secret of the Crystal Kingdom

"The book grabbed me in the first two chapters and has gripped me all the way. Im there with the characters and the writer has enabled me to picture it all in my mind as I read along. I will recommend this to all ages. I hope the next one comes out soon."

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Children Love Lesson

"I feel this work is geared more towards children of a certain age that could understand the language used here, but also pre-teen to early teenagers as the work seems to present a story that could easily instruct to this demographic. Regardless, the world developed by the author is engaging."

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