What is your opinion?
Great
"This story pulled me in right from the beginning. The atmosphere is vivid and the author does a great job building tension while slowly revealing the deeper layers of the plot. The characters feel real and complex, especially the protagonist, who grows naturally as the story progresses. The worldbuilding is detailed without being overwhelming, and every chapter leaves you wanting to know what happens next. If you enjoy stories with mystery, emotion, and strong storytelling, this one is definitely worth reading."
The Dragon’s River
"Loving this book so far. The storyline takes unexpected turns and takes you where you least expect. I can't wait for more chapters. "
Good premise but too many inconsistencies
"This story has a lot of potential but it feels like he author was not paying attention. I love the premise but could not finish the book as the inconsistencies are too distracting. The characters are not introduced in a way that enables us to understand them or where they come from. There are large leaps in logic and inconsistencies from chapter to chapter, and sometimes within the same chapter. In some places the tense changes from present to future within the same paragraph which is confusing. Retelling the same events from the POV of different characters feel repetitive. This storytelling mechanism only works well if the retelling is deliberate and provides additional information. The spelling and grammar need work - preferably proof reading by a human and not relying on automated tools. "
