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The Dark Capturer (Still being edited)

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Summary

In the kingdom of Emberfall, some girls have gone missing. Their friends Anna, Silena, Grayson and Nathan set out on a quest across cursed forests to rescue them. They have to save their friends before it is too late.

Chapter 1 - The Introduction


Anna Hawthorne's POV

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I'll start with introducing myself, I am Anna Whitethorne. I am 17 years old and I am a daughter of a businessman. I have dark brown hair and dark brown eyes and I have Fire powers. I have an older sister and brother. Zoe and Grayson Hawthorne. Zoe is in college's last year and Grayson is a businessman. Zoe has black hair and black eyes while Grayson has blonde hair with grey eyes. Zoe has Mind reading powers and Grayson has Shadow travelling powers

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Anyways it's 8 in the morning and my sister bursts in through the door waking me up.

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"Anna! Wake up!" She says clearly excited for something. Which means something is going to go wrong for me

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"What do you want Zoe? why are you so excited?" I say sleepily.

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"Dad said he has amazing news! So, get up and get ready." She said and left my room.

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I got up and put on a Black Hoodie with Wide-Leg Jeans and Black and White Nike Sneakers. I went downstairs to see my family waiting for me on the table.

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"Good morning!" I said sliding into my chair.

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"Finally! dad what did you want to tell us?" Zoe asked. I have a feeling she already knows a bit about whatever news dad was going to tell us.

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"God Zoe, you need to calm down" I say

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"I am with Anna on this one" Grayson says smiling. Our parents were laughing at us

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"Well, the news is that we are shifting houses. We are moving back to Emberfall" Our dad said

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We all started celebrating. Emberfall is our home country. We moved to Medonia a bit back. We all missed it. Besides, my best friend also lived there. Isa.

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"When are we moving back?" Grayson asked.

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"By the next Saturday." today was Monday

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"What about my school?" I asked

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"I already talked to your old school Ember High. By the next Monday you would be in your old school."

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"But the year will end in 3-4 weeks."

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"They allowed you in so I guess it's fine"

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We finished our breakfast and Grayson dropped me and Zoe to our School and left for his work.

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Grayson was wearing a Black shirt tucked into Black slacks.

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Zoe was wearing a brown and beige striped knit sweater with a V-neck and loose sleeves with High-waisted, wide-leg brown trousers.

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In school I went to my first class of the day Sword fighting.

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Happy birthday Iaso2010! I wrote this book for your birthday and I hope you like it. (that is why it is from your POV)

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