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Magic and Love

"A story full of magic and the battle between darkness and light, between love and duty. I loved how the story unfolded with each chapter, bringing to the surface the relationships and connections between the characters—ones you wouldn’t even expect. And the twist at the end of the book leaves you with no choice but to read the second part (thankfully it’s already published 😄). I hope love will overcome the darkness and that Freya and Jack will find their happiness."

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Good, evil, love !!

"If you're looking for a true and creative story then you came to the right place !! With it's vibe it kind of remainds me of Heaven's Secret - both as a main character have a strong and compassionate woman who as an adult gets immersed in a fight of good and evil, and both include captivating love stories - if you liked it, I think you'd like that story too. The grammar misses may by a bit confusing, but I don't think they will stop you from enjoying the book"

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Speechless!

"I intended to read maybe 2 chapters before work this morning... I never made it to work hahaha. The plot was so unexpected that I'm just... WOW. I don't know where that came from! Absolutely mind-blown👏👏👏👏"

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Epic

"This story is epic in scope, with vivid imagery and an extremely intricate plot and cast of characters. The main character's hidden identity as a powerful celestial being, surrounded by magical secrets, makes her journey growing up within a human society very poignant. The author managed to put together this complex tale despite struggling with debilitating medical conditions, which makes this achievement all the more impressive. With some editing, this book would be even more fabulous."

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A Magical, unforgettable journey.

"This has been a truly magical read. It’s fascinating how the author managed to create a beautiful fantasy world filled with suspense, surprising twists, and characters with depth, shaped by their pasts. Everything started to unfold more and more as the chapters progressed. I fell in love with the magical world, the characters, and especially Freya, her resilience, her pure heart, and her abilities are remarkable. I also felt for Jack and Adam; even though they were raised in darkness and meant to be “evil,” you can’t help but sympathize with them. Jack’s struggles with his emotions and sense of duty were particularly compelling. The plot kept me intrigued throughout, and the ending left me on a cliffhanger with so many unanswered questions. I Will be reading book 2 for sure! "

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Really cool inspired story

"I think this story is a true definition of someone bringing to life their imagination and dreams. It expands from the time you start and grows into this beautiful world of magic, powers awakening, family secrets and a love that seems to transcend rules, expectations and blood lines. It keeps you hooked through the entire story! Thanks author. I enjoyed reading. "

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