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Bumble bee

"Awesome read "

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Sweet novel

"I loved the character-building in this novel. They felt real and I cared about them immediately. Heartwrenching and heartwarming. I would love to see more side stories about the secondary and tertiary characters. Slow burn done well."

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Great book!!

"This was a wonderful story. I laughed and cried all though out reading it. I would recommend this book for sure."

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Beautiful

"I was caught off guard by how this story moved me. The characters are all so individual and well described. Every action and event play a part in the overall story. It’s a longer story for inkitt, but every chapter counts, and it never stalls. There truly is some heartbreak in this story, and it’s not just the romantic kind. Not only does it gut punch you when it happens, it follows you throughout the rest of the book in a way superficial stories don’t depict, but in a way that doesn’t dominate either. Despite being a dramatised romance (which is what we’re all here looking for, right?) it brings some far more real elements than I’ve seen in any other work on this site. The romance certainly doesn’t disappoint. Ethan is a guy that girls will swoon over, and their Dads won’t be mad about it. Neither he nor Bailey cleanly fit into any of the stereotypical romance story archetypes. I did find some of the earlier chapters a touch confusing timeline wise, but it didn’t dull my enjoyment of the story. If you’re looking at reviews because you’re on the fence, go and start reading this story immediately."

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I love it❤️i love it❤️

"I love it!!!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️so so good!"

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Bad boy

"5his book is very good and fantasy wish filled I love it"

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Bumble Bee (Bailey's love story)

"This is the most amazing love ❤️ story I have ever read. I am lost for words as to how to describe just how moving and emotional this book is. Were anyone to secretly watch me reading this book, they for sure would think I am a mental case on the loose. They would observe a person who kept smiling at first, go from very sad and crying 😢😭 rivers of tears from a broken 💔 heart to constantly laughing out loud 😂😂 to the point of collapsing. Then to stamping one's feet in utter frustration before going back to crying 😭 only this time these are happy, happy tears. That is the emotional rollercoaster of this book. This Author is truly gifted and should definitely keep writing. I was truly disappointed when I realized this was her only book! This book read so real and true to life, I find myself wondering if it was loosely based on a true story. When all is said and done this was indeed a fantastic read! BRAVO!"

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Bumblebee: Bailey's love story

"I'm in love with the story the more I read it"

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New Favorite

"This is seriously one of my favorite Inkitt stories! I was intimidated by the length but getting to see how their love transformed and grew over the years made it worth every page. Such a beautiful story. I hated to see it end. "

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Bumble bee

"Beautifully written. "

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Such a great story!

"This was such an amazing story with such a great plot. There were some complaints about some of the plot hooks, but I think it really enhanced the overall message of the story and made it more realistic. This was such an amazing experience! The writer needs to work on grammar, spelling, and punctuation but nothing a thorough edit couldn’t fix. Overall great story, one of my favorites for sure! "

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Bumble Bee: Bailey's Love Story

"This was one of the first stories I read when I started using InkItt. I fell in love, I felt the loss of a brother and friend and I experienced the tension. A very good read. Loved the story."

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Baileys love story

"Loved this book! Had so much happiness and natural love, such a feel good book "

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Gamble bee Bailey

"Awesome love story❤️ good job"

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Bumble Bee: Bailey's love story.❤️❤️

"Beautiful and enchanting. Loved every minute of it. This story maintains a steady pace and is like watching a flower bloom, from childhood sweethearts to lovers to Man and wife, Ethan and Bailey's life has come full circle. There are moments that melt your heart,make you cry a river and wish you found someone to love you the way these two love each other. All in all this story is worth our time."

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Love it happy ending

"Love the story , wish that happiness happened to me 😊"

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Bumble bee. Bailey's love story

"A wonderful book. I loved wvery minute of it. The author is very talented."

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Amazing!

"I love this story! Thank you!"

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Awesome read

"I love the emotional rollercoaster between these two."

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Great story!

"Loveable characters, good plot. "

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