Inkitt
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What is your opinion?

Breading program

"Good read so far. Very explanatory and very descriptive. And the wording is easily understood and visuaulized"

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Reading to the end.

"I'm really enjoying the story. I'm trying to get back into the habit of reading books again. This is one of the first to catch and hold my attention. I really want to find out what happens to all of the characters at the end of the story, especially Salice and Sam."

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Amazing

"I recommend this book to 16+ people and I love the whole plot of the story plus the friendship turned more"

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Breeders

"The book is good. Very interesting and suspenseful. Though, there are some minor mistakes that could be fixed with re-editing. Grammar and punctuation are used correctly. Really recommend to anyone who loves sci-fi and ths history of slave trade. It's pretty similar to that."

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Great Book! Can't wait for more

"This book is very suspenseful. It's a gripping view of the dark side of humanity as well as a ray of hope in a wasteland. The characters are very complex. Showing how complicated humans are, what they are willing to do to survive. I just wish the book was finished. "

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The breeders

"I like the fact that even though fictional it paints an almost realistic future and it makes you wonder what choices you will make if that were to happen in real life. "

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More chapters please

"Please upload more chapters. Story is good"

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Breeders

"It’s a good book. The story line is interesting. I recommend this book for those that like future realistic ideas. "

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A good read

"This story has a very interesting plot with lots of twists. There are a few grammatical errors but it's really not bad. I can't wait for more updates!"

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Breeder

"I thoroughly enjoyed the plot and writing style. It lacked the stiltedness of amateur writers and the concept is novel and fresh. I just wish the author would complete it. It hurts to be left hanging when the story is worth the read and time."

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Breeders

"Very good im still reading it"

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Author

"I like the plot. I like the characters. I like the transgender line of Derek. I like the romance of sams character. The idea of the sectors reminds me of the matched. There is only so much to say. I have said what I can. Why are you doing this? I liked the names of Eden. I don’t like the doctor. I don’t like the clinic. "

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Promising Premise

"If the Hunger Games and The Handmaid's Tale had a child, this would be it. I'm enjoying the story and I'm very curious to see where it's going and how it will bring the reader along with it. I have a sneaking suspicion that a love triangle will be formed, and I'm hoping that I'm wrong, as it seems every dystopian future setting has one of those thrown in as a major plot point. I want to see Salice grow into her own woman without requiring a complicated love interest to shape the journey. "

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Breeders

"I give this book a 4 star, i loved it and i loved the plot twist at the end. I would recommend it to people whol live sci-fi books."

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Breeders

"I absolutely love it so far, haven’t stopped reading since I started it. "

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Breeders

"I like it because I wrote it lol"

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Breeders

"It is very interesting. I have never read a story quite like this one. "

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Awesome

"I really enjoyed this. And I know others will too"

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Wonderbar

"This was awesome! Seriously loving the take on this. "

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Breeders

"Dang it ended too soon. Are you going to add more storyline or just write a new book 📖?"

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