Focal Point by Anthony DiChiara at Inkitt
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Focal Point

Summary

Ever wonder how Gene Roddenberry came up with the idea for Star Trek? Focal Point tells the fictional story of how young Gene met the Real Dr. McCoy during the City on the Edge of Forever mission.

Status
Complete
Chapters
7
Rating
5.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
13+

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The assassins were close— of that, he was sure. How long has it been, he wondered? Days…Weeks. He couldn’t remember. All he knew was that he was tired of running, and very hungry. If McCoy didn’t find refuge soon, he’d be a goner for sure.

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