Written like an action movie

"I think the overall idea behind the story is good but it's moving so fast. Sometimes way too fast to keep track of what's happening. What's written in 67 "pages" could - with good editing - well be a story (of around 300 "pages") with a slow build up in suspense, bursts of action and getting to know the main characters plus see them evolve throughout the story. I'd love to read that. Now the story feels rushed which it doesn't deserve. To me it seems like a storyline of a James Bond movie merged with Mr and Mrs Smith with a pinch of mafia. The point of views are good, maybe use them to thoroughly describe the scenes, the feelings and thoughts? I'd like to read more about e.g the wedding, the chase, the history behind the grudges towards the other one's family, etc. I hope this is helpful to you."