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Brilliant but brutal

"I couldn’t put this one down, I was obsessed. It had some very hard to read parts due to the nature of the content but it was brilliantly executed & captivating. The characters are believable & the storyline flows at a good pace, not too fast. "

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Addicted

"C’était vraiment une superbe histoire. On est pris dedans et même si c’est sombre on accroche grave. C’est des montagnes russes mais très bien écrit. Très très bien écrit. C’est une histoire à part mais même en étant dark ça se lit comme une histoire à suspense. Vraiment top "

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Well well well

"That was a roller coaster "

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Intense

"This book is super intense leaving you with so many strong emotions. At first chapters I didn't expect something like this,though not complainig. This book absolutely blew me away with its plot and characters. The FMC is very strong indeed to withstand all that abuse. Cannot wait to see how things gonna happen in book two. Love this.❤️"

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Control

"Control cones in many ways. This story has several different factors of control. I am loving this so far ❤️🤩😍🤩"

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Fantastic

"This is one of the best books I've read so far. You can feel yourself in her shoes. The things she put up with to be able to stay are horrific, but the determination she shies is amazing. It' was great when she started to just 'become a shell' to block it out and it actually frustrates him. Its just so hard to see her do a final thing to earn her freedom to get stabbed in the back. I've just started reading book 2 and it's great. I just hope it is is as this one because I'm left speechless at this story "

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My girl went through so much 😭

"I loved this book so much, even tho I HATED the character of Rafe. Some chapters were hard to read but I guess plot demanded them. Can't wait to read next book and see the revenges Kit will exact upon. "

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Hard raw strong

"A good read..looking forward to the next book.."

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Merciless

"I love that Kit has finally developed a backbone. And I'd like to see how she makes Rafe Ashford pay. I just hope she doesn't fall back under his control. I typically read romance novels. So this is something totally new. Thank you for this compelling story. "

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Merciless

"I really don't like Rafe and hope this comes back to haunt him. He is playing at dominance and submission but missing one crucial point. A dom is supposed to care for his sub in all ways. He takes care of her physically but deliberately damages her emotionally. He acts like a narcisistic sadist."

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I am the biggest fan of this

"Honestly, the most interesting story so far"

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Didn’t care for this half

"She is so obnoxious and such a hypocrite. I kinda wish he had kept his money and moved on with his life as the good person he became and found someone who didnt feel the need to judge or teat him constantly. He was changing on his own without her trying to make him miserable all the time. She slept on a floor half a night because she chose to yet she made him sleep on the floor with no choice for weeks after he spent even more weeks prior sleeping on the ground outside. Horrible woman. By the end it seemed you were using AI cause it was repeating things we already know like AI does. "

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