Inkitt
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Anders

"I love this book and would like to see it continued. I love a good romance novel and im tired of seeing played out cliché romance stories to me this was a breath of fresh air something different but not completely insane or all over the place it was well put together and nicely written."

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Awesome but it was too short, pls write a sequel.

"Cool, pls write a sequel."

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Anders

"Your book is awesome. I love the plot and the characters. Keep writing because you are very good at it."

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"I never thought that a twisted, dark humor story could be called sweet and endearing but here I stand corrected. This is such a simple story but it has the capability of keeping its readers hooked till the end. Though there were a few grammatical errors which can very easily be rectified. "

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Perfect!

"This was perfect. Loved it. Keep up the good work. I will recommend this to all of my friends definitely."

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Two Little Devils

"I really enjoyed this story. It’s a short novel, both an action movie and a romance all wrapped up in one. Though I expected more outright sex, I really appreciated the long twists and turns that brought the love to a resoundingly good finale. The action scenes are superbly written, and the authors style is impressive. Grammar and tense is impeccable. I usually advise all authors to seek an editor for these issues, but in this case the author doesn’t need it...just get it into some contests so we can publish it! Good on you, it’s a great work. "

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Anders

"I've always been a sucker for stories with dangerous gay romance. The plot was well thought out and I litterally read it with in three hours. I just couldn't put it down."

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Anders

"I like the book, the violence and gore scenes is well written I could picture the scenes it's like I am living the book. I love the characters they are all well written and powerful in their own right and I love a book with a powerful female. All in all it's a book I will recommend. "

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Nice

"It's a nice story "

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