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A world not only written, but also directed.

"One thing about you, AG, you know how to paint a world, but this time the extra treat was in the visuals which isn't anything new to you, but as you mentioned in the final note about imagining how a certain bit would be acted out, or edited, I could also see it. You didn’t only write a story but you somehow gave images, edits, I've always loved how you used music in your writings as well. The motifs were nicely used as well. I could go on and on about the structure you build. It's really hard to tell much about this story without spoiling anything because the events are all built on top of each other, but I'll just say the finale was quite a whiplash. Never did I expect that this was what's gonna happen, I've put expectations on each character, and I thought (foolishly enough) that I had the ending figured out, but the finale was like someone pulled the rug under my feet. I got quite attached to the characters. Which leads us to the other part, I can't dissect each character here (I'll probably do it on the wall post though hehe) but Saint's story is also something I didn't see coming at all! The more time we spend with him, seeing how he goes from 10 to 0 then back to 10 then 0 again, the route he took, him trying to find a reason for all this chaos other than his own choices was very well executed. I really loved Tor and Leon's dynamic sooo much, I would've hoped for a separate story just for them but oh well... Finally, this really ranks amongst my favourites by you. Thank you for all your effort and can't wait to pick up the rest of your works!🤍🤍"

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Sleepercell

"I don’t want to write anything that could be a spoiler, so I’ll just say that you should read this. And while you’re reading, put away all your expectations about the characters and your assumptions about plot lines, because they’ll inevitably be wrong. Great story."

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