~IN EVERY SIGHT , I FELT I AM YOURS~
Hello cuties ššš»šš»š so this is my first work I hope so that u all liked it ... English is not my first language so maybe u will find some mistakes but I tried my best not to do so many mistakes in it
Btw hey I am ian ....of course that's not my real name hehe šš»šš» that's my nickname , and i am a teenager...but wait wait wait!!
I know I am a teenager but my story is not childish type...this is a soft romantic story ...no dark romance or smuts so if you are a dark romance reader I am not sure you'll like my story or not ...but if you are a soft romance liker you'll definitely like itš.....ahmm so in my story there are three couples
So let me introduce my characters now
NAINA SAXENA
⢠20 yrs
⢠Dancer by heart
⢠Fashion Designing student
⢠Dream ā Dance Teacher
⢠Soft girl à Possessive in love
⢠Simple outside à Intense inside
SHIDDHARTH MALHOTRA
⢠22 yrs
⢠Engineering graduate
⢠Loves cooking
⢠Now handling fatherās jewellery design business
⢠Sweet nature à Professional outside
⢠Calm for the world à Chulbul for friends & family
VRINDA GUPTA
(Best friend of naina)
⢠19 yrs
⢠Fashion Designing student
⢠DREAM :- create own Brand
⢠Yapper girl à Bold soul
⢠Toxic family background
⢠Loud outside à Strong survivor inside
RITIK SAXENA
(Younger Brother of naina)
⢠16 yrs
⢠Class 12 student
⢠School topper à Head boy
⢠Soft-hearted boy
⢠Sings well à Writes shayari
⢠Guitar à Drawing
⢠Teenager in age ā not in love
⢠Loves deeply, not casually
PREET KAUR
⢠20 yrs
⢠Punjabi girl
⢠NGO Head à BA student
⢠Social worker by choice
⢠Spiritual outside à Fire inside
⢠Mature mind à Anger issues
KARTIK BANERJEE
(Best friend of shiddharth)
⢠22 yrs (11 months older than Shiddharth)
⢠MBBS ā 3rd year
⢠Extremely intelligent
⢠Barely attends à Still topper
⢠Hardcore extrovert
⢠Makes friends everywhere
⢠dream ā Photographer
Other characters will exposed in story
So let's start my very first chapter of my first story
I hope you'll like it...šš·
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āMummy, mummy!ā a girl shouted as she hurried down the stairs.
She was wearing a simple off-white kurti, yet the open, thick, silky black hair falling down to her waist added an effortless charm to her otherwise plain look.
Glancing at the golden ladiesā watch on her wrist, she continued descending the stairs, while her deep black, beautiful eyesāmatching the shade of her hairābegan searching for someone.
āYes, yes, Iām here. What is it?ā
A woman in her forties stepped out of the kitchen, wiping her hands.
āMom⦠Iām leaving for college. Okay, bye. Love you.ā
The girl leaned in, kissed her mother on the cheek, and rushed toward the door.
āHey, wait. At least have some breakfast before you go,ā Jhanak ji said, trying to stop her.
āIāll eat something in the canteen, Mom,ā the girl replied, already halfway out.
And with that, she slipped out of the house.
~outside the college~
By the time she reached college, the gate was already crowded.
āidiot girl ,do you even know how long Iāve been waiting for you?ā
A girl standing at the college gate said this. She was wearing a cute brown top paired with black jeans, a wristwatch on her hand, and a simple ring on her index finger. Her hair wasnāt long, yet its soft, curly texture in a brownish shade left no gap in completing her look.
" Come on, hurry upāthe class is about to start...."she said
āSorry, Vrinda⦠please forgive me,ā Naina said quickly. āI was up all night finishing the assignment. Thatās why I woke up late.ā
āOh really, madam?ā Vrinda folded her arms and raised an eyebrow. āAnd where is this very important assignment?ā
Naina froze.
āOh no⦠I left it at home,ā she whispered, panic sinking in.
āWhat am I supposed to do now, Vrinda? The professor will eat me alive.ā
Vrinda rolled her eyes. āCall home and ask someone to bring it. Hurry up, you fool. Itās his second lectureāsomeone can make it before then.ā
Naina quickly made a phone call and explained everything.
āPlease, bhai⦠youāre not even going to school today,ā she pleaded.
āJust bring my assignment for me.ā
āOh please, didi,ā a boy replied from the other end.
āLet me rest at home today.ā
Before Naina could say anything else, Vrinda snatched the phone from her hand.
āRitik,ā she said softly, āplease bring the assignment.ā
The moment he heard Vrindaās voice, Ritik sat up straight in bed.
āOkay⦠fine,ā he said quickly. āIāIām coming.ā
He tried to steady his racing heartbeat as he spoke.
The call ended.
āHeās on his way,ā Vrinda said, handing the phone back to Naina.
āWow,ā Naina said, half amused, half amazed.
āI begged him so much and he didnāt careābut one word from you and he agreed.ā
Meanwhile, Ritik jumped out of bed, got dressed in a hurry, and rushed out of the house.
Ritik reached the college.
He asked the driver to park the car aside and walked in.
And there she wasāVrinda.
He had seen her countless times before, yet every time felt new. The moment his eyes found her, everything else seemed to stop. The noise, the people, the rushānothing mattered.
She looked the same.
And still, his heart forgot how to stay calm.
āHello?ā Vrinda said, snapping him back.
āWhere did you get lost? Give the assignment quicklyāthe second lecture is about to start.ā
She took the papers from his hand.
Her fingers touched his.
Just for a second.
And his heartbeat went crazyālike it always did.
Before he could say anything, she held Nainaās hand and walked away.
Ritik stayed there, watching her go.
āI donāt know,ā he thought, a small smile forming,
āif Iāll ever be able to tell herā¦ā
He stopped, feeling shy even in his own thoughts.
āā¦that she means everything to me.ā
He turned back, got into the car, and said softly,
āLetās go home, uncle.ā
And the car drove awayā
with a boy whose love was quiet, simple, and only for her.
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On the other side, in Kolkataā
A man who was neither too old nor too young paced the room, irritation written all over his face. He dialed a number angrily.
No answer.
With a frustrated sigh, he ran a hand through his hair and dialed another number.
The call connected.
āNamaste, uncle,ā a cheerful voice greeted him.
āNamaste, beta⦠Siddharth?ā Shravan ji asked.
āIs Kartik with you?ā
Standing nearby, Kartik immediately started shaking his head dramatically, mouthing no no no.
Siddharth glanced at him with his brown deep eyes and hesitated.
āJi⦠uncle,ā he said carefully. āNo, heās not with me.ā
āi hope u are not lyingā Shravan ji pressed.
āYes, yes, uncle,ā Siddharth replied quickly. āHeās really not here.ā
Shravan ji took a deep breath.
āAlright,ā he said at last. āHeāll show up at your place sooner or laterāyou two are childhood friends after all. When he comes, make him talk to me.ā
The call ended.
Siddharth turned toward Kartik with his hand folded. āSo⦠what did you run away from home for this time?ā
He said with his eyebrow lifted.
Kartik flopped onto the chair dramatically.
āSame old lecture, bro,ā he said casually.
āYou have to take care of the hospital. Youāre my only son. Photography is useless.ā Bla bla blaādaily soap stuff.ā
āBut uncle isnāt completely wrong,ā Siddharth said, trying to be reasonable.
āIf you donāt handle things, who will?ā
Kartik laughed dryly. āOh please. Iāve already done everything they wanted. Cleared NEET, killed my sleep, studied like a robot, and now I am doing MBBS.ā
He leaned back, shaking his head.
āBut did anyone ask me what I want? Even once?ā
Then, with a grin that hid his frustration, he added,
āBro, I donāt want to save lives. I want to capture them. Photographyāthatās my thing.ā
lekin tu unki ikloti aulad hai yaar" Siddharth said, resting a hand on his shoulder.
(But youāre their only child, man,ā)
"To ek or paida kar lete , mane thodi roka tha" Kartik shot back with a shrug, brushing his hand away.
(Then they shouldāve made a backup, I didnāt stop them)
Seeing Kartikās mood flip, Siddharth wisely changed the topic.
āAlright, Mr. Rebel. Whatās the plan now? Because I know youāre not going home anytime soon.ā
Kartikās eyes suddenly lit up.
āShimla.ā
āWhat?ā Siddharth blinked.
āShimla, dude,ā Kartik said, already excited.
āFour days. Mountains, cold weather, zero drama.ā
āNow?ā Siddharth asked.
āYes, now,ā Kartik grinned.
āCome on, move fast. Iāll handle uncle before you even open your mouth.ā
āAnyway, youāre going to drift away from me in a few days.ākartik said
"Okie fine.... let's go" shiddharth Finally gave in
*Few days later*
āHey, my daughter is here,ā Nainaās father said the moment he saw her walk in through the door.
āPapa⦠how did you come home so early today?ā Naina asked as she sat down next to Rajat.
āWell, today all my meetings wrapped up early, so I thought Iād spend a little more time with the kidsāand with their mother,ā Rajat said casually, smiling.
āThatās enough⦠you only ever notice your children. Who am I to you anyway?ā Jhanak said, placing the tea tray on the center table near the sofa, her tone light but pointed, before heading into the kitchen.
āPapa⦠whatās wrong with Mom?ā Naina whispered as soon as Jhanak walked away.
āWhat can I tell you, madam⦠your mother seems a little upset with me,ā Rajat said, lifting his teacup.
āOh? And why?ā Naina asked.
āThat, only your mother knows. My job is just to make things right,ā Rajat replied, glancing toward the kitchen where Jhanak was moving around, clearly teasing her.
āNo one is upset. Stop trying to make me look bad in front of my kids, Mr. Sexenaā Jhanak said, setting the snack plates on the table before turning back toward the kitchen.
āHey, listen to me for a secondā¦ā Rajat placed his cup down and stood up.
As he did, he said to Naina, āGo freshen up. Weāre going out to eat. And tell Ritik too,ā before following Jhanak into the kitchen.
āNow tell me, what did I do wrong this time, hmm? So this useless man can fix himself quickly,ā Rajat said, stepping inside.
āOh, like you donāt already know. Itās always the kids, kids, kids. As if I donāt exist anymore. Fineādonāt talk to me either,ā Jhanak said, wiping the kitchen counter.
Rajat hugged her from behind. āSo this is what it isāmy wife is jealous of her own children now?ā he said softly near her ear.
āWill you move away, or should I slap you? Iāve been telling you for two days that we should go out, and you didnāt remember then. Today you suddenly had time because you wanted to talk to Naina,ā Jhanak said, complaining like a child who had been waiting too long.
āOkay, okayāmy mistake. Forgive me. Just listen now,ā Rajat said gently.
āWhat?ā Jhanak replied, still pretending to be annoyed.
āI brought something for you,ā Rajat said, pulling out a chocolate from his pocket and handing it to her.
A smile appeared on Jhanakās face, but she quickly hid it.
āI donāt want it,ā she said.
āCome on,ā Rajat said, turning her toward him and taking out another chocolate.
Jhanak took both chocolates and smiled. āYou really know how to handle me.ā
Rajat then pulled out a rose from his other pocket and said, āWell, that comes with 28 years of experience.ā
āBut Papa, youāve only been married for 22 years,ā Ritik said from the kitchen doorway. He had heard everything.
āSix years of dating plus twenty-two years of marriage. That makes twenty-eight,ā Rajat replied without thinking.
āOoooo....,ā Naina and Ritik reacted together.
āWaitāboth of you,ā Rajat reacted , suddenly realizing whon heād replied.
āHehe, bye Papa. Weāll go get ready. You two carry on,ā they said together before running off.
āHey, stop right there,ā Rajat called out, chasing after them.
And Jhanak stood there, laughing to herself.
Laughing and chatting like this, everyone finished dinner and came back home. It was around nine at night now. Everyone was sitting together in the living hall, casually talking, when somewhere in the middle of the conversation, Rajat comes with a question.
āBy the way, Naina is growing up now, isnāt she?ā Rajat said, looking at Naina and then glancing toward Jhanak.
āShould we get her married?ā Rajat added.
āPapa?ā Naina suddenly became serious and looked straight at Rajat.
āNo, I meanāwe can start looking for a boy. Whether you want to marry or not is completely your choice,ā Rajat said quickly.
āPapa, I donāt want to look for a boy and I donāt want to get married either. Please, this topic should not be brought up again,ā Naina said clearly, without softening her words.
āBut listen, beta⦠thereās a boy we know. Heās the son of a very old friend of ours. Just meet him once. Weāre not forcing you, and weāre not talking about marriage right now. You meet, talk, see each other. If you both like each other, fine. If not, you can say no,ā Jhanak said gently, placing her hand over Nainaās, trying to reason with her.
āPlease, Mummy.⦠I donāt want to get married. End of discussion,ā Naina said, getting angry as she stood up and walked straight to her room.
Jhanak and Rajat were left looking at each other.
Ritik watched their faces and then said, āDonāt talk to Di about this right now. When she wants to get married, she will. Her mood will be better by morning. Donāt worry.ā
"Hmm..." Rajat and jhanak hmmed
And everyone went to their respective rooms and sleep
Now Naina was in her room, and she was extremely angry.
She called Vrinda and told her everything.
āOh God⦠why are you getting so worked up over this? First of all, calm your mind a little. Go eat some ice cream and chill.
And second, theyāre only asking you to meet a guy. Theyāre not making you sit directly in a wedding mandap,ā Vrinda said, trying to calm Naina down.
āwhose best friend are youāmine or theirs? Fine, I wonāt talk to you either. Everyone is the same,ā Naina snapped in anger.
āOkay, okay, sorry my love. Now tell meāwill you eat ice cream?ā Vrinda said, quickly changing the topic.
āYes⦠but can we even go out right now?ā Naina agreed, then hesitated.
āstupid girl!!... I already sent it for you. The order must be arriving any moment. Go receive it and fix your mood,ā Vrinda said casually.
Just then, the doorbell rang.
Without cutting the call, Naina went and received the order, then came back to her room.
āVrindaa⦠thank you so much. Youāre really too good,ā Naina said after seeing the ice cream.
āBut when did you order this?ā Naina asked.
āThe moment your call came. I could hear it in your voiceāhow messed up your mood was. Now eat your ice cream, sleep peacefully, and wake up in a better mood. Good night,ā Vrinda said and cut the call.
Naina ate the ice cream. The anger slowly melted, the heaviness in her chest softened, and after her mood finally settled, she lay down and fell asleep quietly.
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After classes ended, the two of them sat on the college ground, the noise of students fading around them.
āArey yaar, why are you still sitting here ruining your mood over the same thing?ā
Vrinda snapped, shooting Naina an irritated look.
āWhy arenāt you trying to understand, yaar?ā Naina said sharply.
āToday itās just a thought in their minds. Tomorrow theyāll actually get me married. I donāt want to get married.ā
Frustration spilled out of her as she ran her fingers through her hair, tugging at the roots.
āI donāt know what to do⦠I seriously donāt understand anything anymore.ā
Vrinda exhaled loudly.
āBro, relax. When your family actually fixes your marriage, then take tension. Why do you start overthinking everything so early?ā
She paused, then added,
āAnd tell meāwhatās your problem with marriage anyway?ā
āNo matter what we say, everyone has to get married someday, right?ā
Naina looked at her for a long moment before speaking.
āYouāre not saying this because you believe it. Youāre saying it because youāve been influenced by Surya.ā
Vrinda reacted instantly.
āYaar, where did Surya come from now?ā
āWhy donāt you just leave him?ā
Naina said, ignoring the question completely.
Vrinda stood up, anger flashing in her eyes.
āHave you lost your mind, Naina? Youāre speaking without thinking. Donāt forgetāI love him. Heās my boyfriend now.ā
āI am thinking,ā Naina said, standing up too.
āHeās not a good guy, Vrinda. Please understand. Youāre so blinded by love that you canāt even see right from wrong anymore.ā
āNaina, pleaseāā
Vrinda raised her hand, stopping her.
āIāve liked him since the beginning of college andāā
She cut herself off, steadying her voice.
āWe were talking about your family and your marriage. Weāll talk about Surya later. Not now.ā
She picked up her bag and swung it over her shoulder.
āIām leaving. Weāll talk tomorrow.ā
āOkay, okayālisten⦠Iām sorry,ā
Naina hurried after her.
āPlease forgive me. I wonāt say anything about him again. Please.ā
Vrinda stopped at the college gate.
āFine,ā she said, turning back with a small smile.
āI forgive you. Anyway, even if I get angry at you, where would I go? Youāre my only friend.ā
āLove you, babu,ā
Naina said, hugging her tightly.
āLove you too, jaaneman,ā
Vrinda hugged her back, holding on longer.
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A few days later, after Siddharth returned to Kolkata from his Shimla trip , the house was buried in packing chaos.
āSweetheartā¦ā
Kartik said, hugging Sudha like a child.
āWhy do you have to go? Why canāt you stay here?ā
āOh, my darling,ā
Sudha hugged him back and kissed his forehead.
āI donāt want to leave you either. God knows what these people get by separating me from my boyfriend.ā
āMaa,ā
Rishabh, siddharth's father, laughed.
āNo one is separating you from your boyfriend.ā
āAnd you can talk to Kartik every day,ā he added teasingly.
āNo oneās stopping you. Also, just so you rememberāthe place youāre refusing to go back to is your sasural.ā
āSo what?ā
Sudha held Kartikās hand stubbornly.
āIām not leaving my child behind.ā
āDadiiiāā
Siddharth came out of his room, grabbed a pillow from the sofa ,and threw it at Kartik before sitting beside them.
āYou have a grandson too. If you ever get free from this useless boyfriend, pay some attention to him.ā siddharth said while looking at sudha and kartik
āOuch! Sweetheart!ā
Kartik clutched his shoulder dramatically and looked at Sudha for sympathy.
āBehave,ā
Sudha said, lightly hitting Siddharthās shoulder.
āAnd donāt say anything bad about my boyfriend. Go help your parents pack.ā
āYes, yes, Iām going,ā
Siddharth muttered, standing up.
āI should leave too,ā
Kartik said.
āI have a flight to catch today.ā
āWhere are you going? MR. Rebel??ā
Siddharth asked.
āYou just arrivedāat least stay for tea,ā
Kiran , shiddharth's mom, said warmly.
āNo, aunty,ā
Kartik replied.
āThere are complications at the new hospital Dad started in Punjab. I need to go. I just came to say goodbye, and if I didn't go now I may can't catch my flight on time."
Siddharth pulled him aside.
āA few days ago you were fighting about not joining the family profession. And now suddenly Punjab? Whatās the deal?ā
Kartik smiled.
āthe deal is that ....if I handle this properly, Dad promised me to buy my dream camera.ā
āOoooh...."
Siddharth laughed.
āFair enough. Go.ā
After saying goodbye, Kartik left, and the house slipped back into its noisy warmth.
It was eight at night now
And here in Mathura.
Naina stood in her room, selecting clothes for the pooja the next day, Vrindaās voice echoing from the phone call on speaker.
āSee? I knew it,ā
Vrinda said.
āIn a few days, your family forgot everything.ā
āYes,ā
Naina smiled.
āNow I can finally move toward my dreamsāwithout the tension of marriage.ā
āOh, by the way, Nainaā¦ā
Vrinda dragged her words playfully.
āWhatās your type? What kind of guy do you like?ā
āVrinda, stop it,ā
Naina avoided the question.
āI donāt want anyone.ā
āStill,ā
Vrinda insisted,
āif you had to date or marry, what kind of guy would it be?ā
Naina thought for a moment.
āSomeone who respects me. Who chooses me in every situation. Someone who is only mine.ā
āWow, madam ji,ā
Vrinda laughed.
āI like age-gap guysāolder, handsome, total villain type.āvrinda start explaining his type
āYes, yes, I know,ā
Naina said.
āThatās why youāre dating Surya.ā
āSuch a playboy,ā
she muttered under her breath.
Thatās when she noticed Ritik standing frozen at the door.
āRitik? When did you come? Do you need something?ā
He didnāt move.
It was as if time had stopped for himā
as if the last surviving flower in his garden had withered.
āRitik? What happened? Where are you lost??ā
Naina called again.
āNāno, di,...n..nothingā
he stammered.
āI needed your laptop for an assignment⦠but itās okay. Iāll come later.ā
He turned and walked away without waiting.
"Older. Handsome. Villain type."
"Thatās why youāre dating Surya."
"Surya."
The words echoed endlessly in Ritikās mind as he reached his room.
His tears was not in his control also
His heart slipped out of his control.
For him, the world had completely come to a standstill.
Sooo hellooooo.....my pyare pyare cutu cutu readers āØš kesa laga aapko meri story ka first chapter plz tell me ....and like my chapter.... I'll come tomorrow with my new chapter thank you for reading š









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