What is your opinion?
Review:
"Compelling story and well-written. The diary entry structure is really interesting. Nixie’s voice is relatable, engaging and really drives the story forwards. Keep up your amazing work! "
Strong Start with Room to Grow
"This story grabbed me right from the beginning - the first two chapters had great energy, and I was really invested in Nixie's voice. The diary format felt fresh and immediate, and I loved the genuine feel to it, especially felt awestruck by how many musical instruments Nixie can play. As the story progressed, I found myself wanting more of that initial momentum. The middle chapters felt a bit more scattered, and I occasionally lost the thread of where the story was heading. In a diary-style format, it can be challenging to strike a balance between authenticity and narrative drive. Still, I think tightening some of those entries and making sure each one moves us forward emotionally or plot-wise would really strengthen this. The technical writing is solid, and there's definitely potential here. I'm curious to see where you take this story as it develops!"
