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The Eternal Scar: Love's weight

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Summary

“Because some lives are worth everything, even eternity itself.” Graven moves through the city like a shadow, bound to its pain and despair, unseen, untouched and alone. An immortal in a world that can’t feel him, he buried every trace of warmth long ago. Until he met her, the one soul who can actually seem him. In a city watched by unseen forces, where balance must be maintained at any cost, their connection should be impossible. Because Graven was never meant to love. Together, they might save each other. Or destroy everything around them. An urban dark fantasy of a forbidden love that changes everything.

Genre
Fantasy/Romance
Author
Kika
Status
Complete
Chapters
32
Rating
5.0 17 reviews
Age Rating
18+

Prologue

Love.

Heh.

What a lie.

It is a glitch in the brain. A corrupted signal in a confused mind. It feeds madness straight to the heart, and the heart believes it, turning irrational. Just like a child given candy who steps off a cliff, believing they can fly.

A cursed myth, fed to the world for millennia.

Soulmates? Bullshit. Butterflies? A trick.

If you believe in love, then you are drowsy, drugged like every other being on this planet, happily brainwashed into submission.

So let me tell you the truth.

Love is a joke. A weapon disguised as salvation. A cobra wrapping slowly around its prey. The victim’s eyes dull and pain becomes their prison.

There I stand, at the edge of a rooftop, staring down at the city.

People blur together like pages in a book I’ve read too many times. The horns of the cars scream below, in a long messy noise. Buildings rise tall and their cracked foundations whisper secrets no one wants to hear.

The whole thing feels like a painting so disgusting I might vomit all over it just to repaint it myself.

I close my eyes, and I jump.

Air slaps my cheeks and asphalt rushes up to greet me. Humidity steals the moisture from my lips.

Then… my wings tear free. Black, violent and uninvited.

They erupt from my back like a detonation, snapping open with a force that steals the fall away from me. I rise instead, gliding past glass and concrete.

I just wish those damn wings would stay buried where they belong, but they never listen. They wait, flapping, demanding applause for saving my life again, as if I ever asked them to.

The fall would not have killed me anyway. It never does. Maybe it would have added a few more scars. So be it. Time has shown me worse.

My name is Graven.

Immortal, carved from heartache and misery. Pain made flesh. An ancient consequence born from wounds too deep to heal.

I did not choose this, it was forced upon me, or so I believe.

I have watched humanity evolve from horses to caravans, from trains to planes. I have seen wars rot the earth, famine hollow cities, empires rise and choke on their own bones.

None of it touched me, not like heartbreak did.

Every fracture shaped me, hardened me, made me into what I am. I am the recoil of devotion. The scream swallowed after “I trusted you.”

Every time love wounds someone, I grow heavier, and I hurt. The wound sinks itself into me so it can abandon the human, leaving them bleeding, shaken, but alive. They move on, but I don't.

I remain, a vessel for what they cannot carry, for what they refuse to name.

Some scars, once made, refuse to fade.

Tonight, somewhere beneath this city, another heart is about to break.

That is when I am born again.

I am the Eternal Scar.


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ohh let me get hooked so that I can enjoy graven

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Powerful opening, with a great 'hook' for readers!

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oh mein Gott, was für ein Einstieg

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