Enjoyable

"This story is really nicely written. You have very vivid descriptions and your style of writing is commendable. The story started off dynamically and made me want to read it; this is great, since you have that something which captures the eye of the reader at once and makes them eager for more. Fitzwilliam is a very interesting, intriguing and captivating character. I love the amusing conversations and his ignorance when he arrives to the future. This shows a witty side of yours, and I always love that in writings. I would love to read more of his adventures, which I hope you will write soon."