Episode 1 The genesis
Few had we known that the boundless chains of fate
had dragged us to where we were needed",
Vin's car rolled along the tarred road, the tyres kissing the ground rhythmically in the dark of the night. It was Ryan's tenth birthday,their son,and they had gone out to celebrate this remarkable day.)
Diana: So, Ryan, make a wish.(beaming with smiles)
Ryan: but there is no cake with candles lit.
Damien: (speaking from the driver's seat, while the others sat behind) Ryan, you don't need candles to make a wish. (He gave a fatherly smile slicing his block face
Ryan: Okay, I will.
They waited in silence for a while,giving advantage to the screeching of the tires to be audible
Ryan: I've made it.
Damien: What? Come on, you didn't say anything
Ryan: There's no need. I said it within. My teacher said that when we make a wish, we should say it inside. (He sighed in a meditative way,putting much emphasis on the last word
Diana: Then will you tell Mum?
Ryan: Never(with a playful glare)
She started tickling him, and they burst into laughter, the ambience was flowing with joy not until,Suddenly, something unknown, rooted up from the ground, appeared in front of the moving car-slightly taller than the car itself.
Damien, carried away by the loving moment he shared with his family, didn't see it, but fortunately, Diana did.
Diana: (screaming) Watch out!
Damien immediately became alert and swerved the car just in time. As this happened, Ryan's adrenaline surged, and he clutched his mother's hands tightly,feeling the rush of blood through her veins she was afraid too
Ryan: Mum, what's going on?
Diana: (though afraid, she tried to calm her son) It's nothing. Dad will take care of it, this reassured him a little, but unfortunately, another creature appeared. Damien dodged again, weaving through them. As more appeared, the drive turned into a terrifying roller coaster. The atmosphere inside the car changed-the warmth faded, fear thickened, and panic grew rapidly ,he sliced through the killing auras of the night trying to avoid these things but,alas, what could mere humans do against such mysterious beings?
The car was struck. It was hurled into the air, spinning violently like a ball rebelling against gravity. As it soared, Diana hugged her son tightly.
"O dearest mother, how sweet art thou."
Amid the chaos, Ryan felt a strange sensation. A speedster with glowing blue stripes suddenly pulled him out of the tumbling car and carried him far away. Dizzy and weak, Ryan couldn't resist. His savior covered his mouth and part of his nose with large hands-rough, yet strangely gentle. A shimmering blue shield enveloped them both,his dizzy eyes could still witness the deadly scene afar
Immediately, the car crash-landed onto the hard surface. From afar, a massive porthole tore open in the air,
and a figure appeared-riding a gigantic, armoured beast shaped like a bird.
The rider radiated a killing aura. His figure was outstandingly normal at first glance, yet undeniably slaying in presence. He wore a vast dark cloak that resembled an advanced technological warrior suit. He leaped off the beast and landed before Damien.
Damien struggled out of the smoking, upside-down car, drenched in blood and writhing in pain. Using his fists weakly, he crawled forward pathetically.
Damien: Ryan... Diana...
As he finally emerged, he saw the figure standing before him, its murderous aura already suffocating him, burying him alive in fear.
Figure: Damien Vins. (He spoke majestically , with a striking familiarity in his voice)Fate was kind to let our paths cross,especially because of him
Damien: who are you (He spoke through pain, anguish, and sorrow,his view was getting dull
Figure: Your end (with a smirk hidden in his mask)
His voice thundered with overwhelming power. His hands began to twist the air, forming a colossal dark tornado that swallowed the entire area-except Ryan and his mysterious savior. The figure's eyes turned pitch-black as greenish lightning shelled the raging storm.
This was chaos incarnate.
From afar, Ryan watched helplessly as the process of his parents' demise unfolded before his eyes,he was powerless
Damien: (within the tornado, screaming in agony) Who are you?!
Figure: Your doom. I am who he is. I am the future to come(audibly)
Immediately, the figure leaped back onto his beast. As he turned away, he glanced back and met Ryan's gaze. Damien was already dead-lifeless on the ground-but the figure smirked.
Figure: We will meet again, Ryan Vins,(it was directed to him )Fate will permit it. I promise,something in the atmosphere stamped this thing in his fainting mind
He entered the dimensional portal. It sealed instantly. The tornado collapsed inward, erupting into a violent dark explosion-and then, silence.
Ryan:right in front of me, My parent were killed
Head intro
Ryan :I am Ryan Vins and these are my friends Ely, Alicia and Iriel, we were affected by Marthardonian DNA 🧬which made us the unexplainable, and the mysterious, not only were our body system were affected, we were as well involved in something big, unbelievable to be exact dangerous the Marthardonian DNA 🧬made us The
TEN YEARS LATER
Listening to the deafening silence and feeling the cold atmospheric breeze brush against his skin, Ryan couldn't help but stare in awe at the emerald beauty before him-Degriss High School. His mind raced with wild imaginations and questions.
What would this school be like? Can I even cope?
Suddenly, a cold touch rested on his shoulder. It was his uncle-the man who had carried his burden for the past ten years, ever since the tragic loss of his parents. He looked at Ryan gently.
Meric: You must be feeling nervous, right? (He gave him a fatherly look.)
Ryan: Yeah... a little. (A faint smile cut across his face.)
Meric: Just kidding. Come on, Ryan. You've got a good coping system in new environments-just like ten years ago. Even though it took a while, I'm sure you can handle it now. (He patted Ryan's back.)
Ryan: (letting out a long sigh) I hope so.
Meric: Just go, kid.
With a light push from his uncle's arm, Ryan moved forward without hesitation and entered the school.
Ryan's POV
The day I entered Degriss High School-the day I set foot through its gates-everything changed.)
(Walking like a new prisoner in a new cell, Ryan was mesmerized 😍 by his surroundings. The sporting fields were drenched in lush green grass, flowers neatly arranged around the gigantic school building, amplifying its beauty until it felt unreal-like being l
ost in a universe of wonder.
He was snapped back to reality by raised voices-voices that exposed the school's flaws and the contrasting nature of its students. 🏫🏫🏫🏫🏫
Ely: Return the bag, Jeff, or the principal will hear about this.
Jeff: Come on, Ely. What are we,babies?
The three bullies burst into mocking laughter. Jeff tossed Ely's bag to Scott, who flung it to another. Ely spun helplessly in the circle, like a dog being toyed with.
Ryan: (muttering to himself) Of all things... this school is still old-fashioned-which is exactly why I might fit in.
He stepped forward and caught the backpack mid-air. Walking up to Ely, he handed it to him.
Ryan: You dropped your backpack. 🎒🎒🎒🎒
Jeff: Who in the world is this knight in shining armour?
Ryan: (ignoring their taunts) You can have it.
As he stretched it out-
Tom: We give the orders here, porcupine!
Tom lunged at Ryan with a punch. Ryan dodged swiftly, causing Tom to mistakenly hit Scott.
Ryan: I'm very sorry. (mockingly and less of expression
What followed was a clash between six individuals. Ryan handled them efficiently and calmly before returning to Ely.
Ryan: Here you go.
(Ely stared at him in fascination.)
Ely: Thanks, friend.
Ryan: No worries, mate. (Still less of expression
Ely: I'm Ely. (They shook hands.)
Ryan: I'm Ryan Vins.
Ely: See you around, mate.
Ely jogged off, but Ryan felt an aura of friendship linger between them.
Ryan continued onward, still absorbed by the school's grandeur. He entered the hallway,overflowing with students, lockers lining both sides.
Ryan: What in the world?!
Nervousness seized control of his system. He walked as though the ground might swallow him whole. Lost in thought, he accidentally bumped into someone from behind. Books scattered across the floor.
Snapped back to reality, Ryan bent down immediately to help.
Ryan: I'm very sorry.
Iriel: I should say that too.
As he looked up, Ryan realized the girl before him was nothing short of an angel. Her majestic gaze, delicate eyelashes, graceful eyebrows, premium lips-everything about her radiated elegance,the oval head complementing her features, but he wasn't someone who absorbs things like this or he would have asked for her name )
Once the books were gathered, she stood.
Iriel: Thanks for the help. Bye. (She smiled softly.)
She walked briskly down the corridor as another girl approached her.









This is a very fantastic book
This is not really a genre I am into but you followed and I am always curious as to what people write! I thought you might like a few tips ;) On platforms like this chapters between 1-2k words work best I think, much longer feels a little overwhelming so it might help your book if you cut the chapter up. Then, if you use - also use a space. Otherwise sentences read as words like brother-in-law instead of: The boy -their son- was ten. Just for a little clarity. My last tip, though that’s a style thing and totally up to you, is the way you let people speak. It feels a little like a script that’s supposed to be acted out instead of read sometimes. Ryan: Hi! vs ‘Hi!’ Ryan shouted. But again, that’s a preference :). I really hope these tips weren’t unwarranted, I always like a little interaction on here so I thought I just be blunt 😊
Oh, and one last tip from one writer to another, your intro. If you make it a little shorter (and take out the smileys 🥲, they make it look AI) I think more people would be drawn to it. But again, up to you!