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"The plot is interesting but there were some areas that I felt could be done better: 1. Backstory of the hunters. Where they came from and what happened for them to be there 2. Name of the person when there is a change in pov. It became confusing after a while as it was clear who was speaking. Good job and hope that these areas can be improved on! "
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"It kept my attention from start to end. Loved how the author began the story and ended it. High level writing. "
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"Very beautiful Novel l"
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"Great story with good twist. The Grammer needs a lot of work, but the story is so strong I have no problem ignoring it. I would make the transitions more announced, but thats just me. Great story! I am enjoying it very much and can't wait to see how it ends. "
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"When the ability to create man is known to humans, the would be more chaos in this world. "
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"Great page Turner, had new adventures every chapter if you just want to lose yourself this is the place for you. "
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"very enjoyable story keeps you guessing"
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"This story is awesome! It is well written and fast paced. The idea of a super-human is not new, but the author used it brilliantly, and Leon, who was raised by Michelle, was born! Designed to be a super crusader he and his companions fight huge beings that look somewhat like big monster bears.with huge blades for claws. This story has many twists and turns, with a surprise ending that will stay with you for weeks!"
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"Thank you for this book and you. Im korean, but i can understood your wruthing also this book. It means your writhing is easy to read for foreigner who like me. So i recommend you that want to study english throw reading to this book. Thank you for your writing."
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"It's a very good story, but you need an editor to assist with the grammar and he needs to add some sort of divider between two different sections. Eg he moved from one person's dialogue and action into another without clear markings."
"Good read, nice concept. Too much concentration on the lead character though."
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"I had a hard time reading because of the grammar issues..Fix those and it will be more interesting. "
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"Story was good but grammar and spelling were bad"
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"At the start the story felt a bit naive. But later on, I found myself immersed in the plot and the characters. I have criticised the writing style in the beginning and Ivstand true to it, but the author certainly has a very unique talent that is for sure."
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"Nor sure if English-language are your 1st language, but not bad. Enjoyed the storyline and plot"
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"Good plot .righty paced story."
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"Except for spelling mistakes, it was a very interesting story."
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"The story idea was good. The grammar was fair to poor, to the point of distracting from the story. There was a lot of dialogue that seemed to go nowhere, it did not advance the story. At times, it seemed to stall out. Define the characters, tell the story. This has potential to be a great story. "
