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Enjoying the read.

I have no idea what is going to happen next, I like that in a story. What a great imagination this author has!

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Enjoyed the story

Interesting subject matter combined with good writing style. The characters seem to come to life.

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Interesri g read with some serious twist.

I like the plot and idea for the story. Character development is good. The only thing I would recommend is to drive the story a little faster. I am looking forward to reading the rest of the story. If you like sci-fi with a mystery, then read this story!

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Great read so far. I cant wait to read more.

The story development is deep. One of the best books I've read so far on this site. I hope the rest is as good as I've read so far! If you like spy novels and covert ops then you will like this book.

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Great story

Enjoying the story. Grammar needs some work but it doesn't distract much.

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Fun fast read

Really enjoyed the 2nd book of the series. Good character development. Fun and a fast read.

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I chose this rating because I am enjoying the story so far. I like the authors build up to the invasion.

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Action, humour and enjoyable!

Fast paced with twist and turns. Great character development. Enjoy the combo of sci-fi and fantasy. Old and lives. Good job.

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Great story

A real page Turner with plots of unforseen twist and turns. Well done.

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Fast paced and full of suprises

Enjoying the read so far. I hang on wanting Steele to take out the trash!

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Great Sci-fi read!

The story development is great. I am hooked to the story, can't wait to read more. Well done.

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Great read!

This story is captivating to me, I can't wait to see where the story goes! Please keep writing!

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Great read!

Great story so that moves at the speed of war. Can't wait to read it each day. Well done.

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Great story that is well written!

I'm hooked. The story is developing nicely and it is well written. I can't wait to read more. Nice job!

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Enjoying the story

The story development is great. I have no idea what is going to happen next. Well done so far, can't wait to see where The story goes.

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Fun read

What imagination! The plot is interesting and the story development is great. I want to keep reading, a real page tuner. I can't wait to see where The story goes.

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Fun read!

The story gets you thinking of the world's problems and humanities faults. With that being said the story is still a very enjoyable read.

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The story has me hooked

Great plot and told very well so far. I don't want the story to end. I really hope there's more by this author to read..

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Enjoying this story very much.

The author has a great gift for story telling. To be able to create the story to make a person want to keep reading is a real gift. Great job so far.

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Great read so far!

Very interesting take on the future of humanity. Story development is impressive with unpredictable revelation. High hopes for a great ending.

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Decent story, a

A little bit more development and proof reading is recommend. The story is good but feels rushed.

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Enjoying this book very much.

The author has a great gift for writing. I feel like I can see and feel the story. That is a gift. Great job so far.

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Interesting read. If you like sci-fi

The writing style is different and enjoyable. You really get to know the characters . Lots of short chapter but very enjoenjoyable. Nice work So far.

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You will like this one!

Great story so far, hard to put down! Please keep writing and I will keep reading. If you like sci-fi with a good plot and action then you will like this one. Great job!

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I am enjoying the story.

I am enjoying the plot and character development very much. Can't wait to see where The story goes.

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Fun read!

Enjoying this story very much. If you are into Sci-fi then you should read this story. The plot is solid, well thought out, and developed. I can't wait to see where the story goes. Looking forward to reading more from this author. Great job! Please keep writing!

I loved how the historical mysteries are addressed in the story. Well done! You will not be disappointed for taking the time to read this story.

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I am really surprised how good thing story is!

I normally don't read stories of this nature. This author nailed it for me! Fast paced and interesting read. Well done!

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Great story line. Fun read. Left wanting more!

Book 2 has me drawn in, just like book 1 did. A fun read leaving me wanting more. I hope there is a book 3!!!!

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Love reading this book so far. Definitely the best sci-fi I've read on here yet.

Great story told very well. Very few and minor errors. This author has skills. I am really enjoying reading this book. I can't wait to see what happens next!!

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Great adventure, I was hooked from the first page.

Great story with good twist. The Grammer needs a lot of work, but the story is so strong I have no problem ignoring it. I would make the transitions more announced, but thats just me. Great story! I am enjoying it very much and can't wait to see how it ends.

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Good read!

The plot twist and the science are very interesting. I am enjoying the read so far. Very curious to see where this story goes next...

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Great read.

I am enjoying this book as the story continues to spin and swing in unpredictable ways. I have found myself enthralled in the story and want more.

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Fun read

Great read so far. The story is interesting and has captured my imagination. Looking forward to reading more.

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Very enjoyable read

Great story that keeps me wanting to read more!

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Great story

Great story line. Draws you in. Minor grammar and spelling issues but doesn't deter from the read. Really enjoying the book so far!

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Interesting read

Feels like a saga. Lots of moving parts to keep up with but very enjoyable.

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Can't put it down..

Gripping story. Leaves me wanting more.

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Great story line.

The story development is great. I dont want to stop reading. Excited to read more of the story. I dont think you will be disappointed reading this story.

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Good read

Interesting read. The world the writer creates is very foriegn, makes you think about what humanity can be capable of.

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Want more

Good story well told. Left wanting more. Cant wait for the next book.

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Interesting concept piece

The ending was weak, but the story was good. It kept me reading until the end. Overall not a bad read- but who am I to say or judge?? I just wish the ending had more depth.

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Fast fun read

I enjoyed the book. Great story line.

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Fun read

I liked the correlations between fact and fiction. Fun read.

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Short but good read

Good story, page turner. Wanted more.

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Fun read.

I liked the adventure. It read well and was a page Turner. Can't wait for the next one.

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