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The Unseen Bride

"I thought Keith was gonna be a cold hearted person but he was manipulated by his family, at the end both of them went through a painful life until they found each other again. It was a great book. "

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Me encanta no tengo nada q decir solo felicitaciones!

"Se lo recomiendo a todas las mujeres q conocen el amor y son felices recordar su juventud al leer esta novelas!,,, "

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Unseen and lonely

"How we hide behind ours prejudice and the mis-constructions people have around and this can destroy everything. Loved how the build something despite theirs walls. Hate how power and money can hurt everybody"

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The Unseen Bride

"It was a very interesting read. I loved how the characters were developed and the storyline always just kind of missing the mark with misunderstandings and wrong conclusions. It is great for romantics without the eroticism that so prevalent today"

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Inseen but not defeated

"It's good reading and very addictive "

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Thoroughly enjoyed 😉

"Truly enjoyed the read couldn't atop reading. Keep up the amazing work look forward to your next book 👌👍🏼"

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Unseen bride

"I loved the story. The beginning was a bit rough in that it was almost depressing at how Ella was treated. Emotional is almost an understatement when she finally celebrates her birthday, so well done. Sometimes it’s hard to tell who said what. The use of cabin instead of office is odd. There are some small grammatical errors that can be fixed easily. Reread what you write out loud and you should be able to catch most of them. I loved the way this story developed. I believe you said this is your first. Excellent! Keep writing, this was so well written. You wrapped up all the loose ends brilliantly. Well done. "

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Me gusta mucho gracias

"Me gusta el ritmo, pero siento que le falta desarrollo a los personajes, pasan de buenos a malos muy rápido jajaja"

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Two lives same heart

"Wow ! I really enjoyed this book! I am also really happy with the ending . Great job !"

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Very wonderful story

"Well written, well spaced. Tear jerking story. Perfect for PMS effects "

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One of the heart wrenching story ...

"What I like is that, how it tells us both of the main protagonist's point of view. At times other supporting characters too like Marcus, Haley and others. But only less. If it was more it would have been dragging. I liked how the characters have grown. What I dislike is that I had to finish it in a day as I was too much into it. Haha. I would like to recommend this to anyone who enjoys romance,drama and family genres like me. At times family can be our biggest enemy. Misunderstanding and miscommunication can indeed lead to lots of heartbreak. "

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The unseen bride

"I loved this book. I cried. Became an emotional wreck. The characters and plot were on point. Would recommend reading."

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The unseen bride

"Very interesting book. Yes I cried😱 I got really annoyed at times and couldn't wait on her to get her revenge. Would have loved to have read more on Eliana's karma though. She was a first class b....But I'm glad they got a happy ending."

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Nat

"Great book! Thanks so much for writing it! It brought me to years many times!"

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Unseen bride

"Excellent! Can’t put it down!"

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👌 Wow

"This story was so interesting and involved, I could not put it down once I started reading it. Read it from first chapter to last without any breaks. Enjoyed it immensely even the shocking parts about the cruel parents which made me cry and thank you, I am so glad that you put a happy ending to it otherwise it would have been very overwhelming emotionally. "

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Binge read worthy <3

"What a gem - randomly started it yesterday because I was bored... Now it's 4am and it feels like I was on a Rollercoaster the last 18 hours. Well done! The way you conveyed emotions and brought it out of the characters was truly masterful! I suspect you're a truly empathetic person who understands the psyche of humans.. I'm excited for your next works :) "

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Best Billionaire

"I love the growth in the characters."

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Es gibt "Menschen", die schlimmer sind als Dämonen und wenn man Pech hat, gehören sie zur Familie...

"Auch wenn man kein Glück bei der Partie seiner geborenen Familie hat, kann man mit seinem eigenen Willen und einigen hilfreichen und wohlwollend Menschen, die einen unterstützen (jeder wie er kann und 'sieht') eine eigene Familie haben. Gegründet auf Vertrauen und Liebe und gegenseitiger Akzeptanz ist alles möglich 🥰❤️ schönes Buch. "

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Great story! S0 many intriguing twists and turns!

"Really great story. Sometimes, a bit disconnected and not really understanding why Ella’s parents were so evil. "

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