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Exciting and Enjoyable!

"I must commend the vivid descriptions of the „New World“, which is very important and very convenient for the start. It sets the scene very well, so that the reader gets immediately acquainted with and alerted about what they can expect from the plot and from further reading. I love the first person perspective; it makes the story much more personal. I loved the idea of uniting the Skulls and the Spirits, even though that seemed almost impossible when first thought of. I also like the nicknames you chose for your characters; they can be a bit revealing about the nature of their bearers. Overall, I have really enjoyed and I recommend this story."

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