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LOVED IT!

"Can’t stop laughing at Iorneste asking Mourne to... enlarge himself and Mourne losing it 😂"

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Dragon

"Love it i could keep reading"

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Iorneste: A Dragon Story

"EXCEPTIONAL! A well-developed plot, vivid imagery, dynamic characters, and an excellent comprehension of word usage combine to create an original work with dragons that is not just "the same old thing" you have read before. This author has an uncanny ability with words and draws the reader in, supplying genuine and sometimes surprising interactions, with a few twists along the way--that Drac guile! I thoroughly enjoyed this read, and am saddened that there isn't a sequel. But even as a stand-alone it is simply superb."

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Iorneste: A dragon story

"I found this story by pure and utter chance, and have enjoyed it very much. I have a deep love for dragons, but even without that, the plot hook is very unique and engaging. I highly recommend giving this a read."

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Dragons. What's not to like about 'em?

"Theme suits my liking, plot so far is interesting. I can figure out the next page content, sort of, but still enjoying it. I like the writing style, or perhaps I could say it is refreshing after reading many novels. Need polishing, but I. Like. It. What I consider lacking is emotional development. Maybe lacking is not correct term, more like not refined. It's there but I feel like it could be better. Overall I would recommended this to fantasy readers."

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Great book

"Great book love it"

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Iorneste: a dragon story

"Wonderfully written, and delightful to read! I am so happy that I found this story, and equally thrilled that you have shared it with us all. Thank you for letting us all into your amazing imagination. This is easily one of the most enjoyable and entertaining stories I have found online. I believe it to be a masterpiece. I hope, one day, to be able to continue the journey of all of the wonderful characters I was able to meet in this tale. Thank you "

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Ironeste a Dragon Story

"Loved this story can't wait for the sequel "

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Great story

"Cool story. Please continue"

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Deep

"Excellent, the manner in which you convey the characters thoughts/feelings is very enjoyable. "

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Iorneste: A Dragon Story

"Amazing book Really good story line but finished quite quickly "

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ABSOLUTELY AMAZING

"This is probably one of the best and most intriguing books I've read in a LONG time. The unique take on dragons is SO refreshing in a genre dominated by the mindless fire breathing lizard. Your writing style is good too. As for technical writing skills, I think I saw a grammar mistake here and there, but otherwise, your fine. Keep up the good work!"

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The story was so well planned that it felt like it was writtin from the ending.

"Amazing story. Descriptions of different scenes were just enough to understand the theme - easy to digest and remember, yet enough to curb the curiosity of it. No certain writing style, changes according to the flow of the story. Also shelle... You will understand once you get there."

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