Poisoned trees and yellow grass

"Hey Karen, tough story of disaster, abuse with onyx mother and other daughter, and a world effected by atomic bombs. your story is fast reading, personal, and caring with your characters and the plot unfolds chapter to chapter............good job Karen, you are on your way.......................william elliott kern"

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Very interesting post apocalyptic world!

"I've always been interested in how humans would behave in a post apocalyptic world (though I could totally do without actually experiencing it). That said, Poisoned Trees and Yellow Grass was a welcomed story! I'm only on chapter six, but I'm digging in fast. I like that each character was well developed with a backstory, and the heartache started well before WW3 broke out. The added war made each characters struggles increasingly more complex (except for Garnet, who actually scored his freedom). I'd like to see more imagery of the environment, though that may come in later chapters."

Wow!

"This story is so sad and tragic. But it would make a great movie! It grabs me that much! Keep up the good work!"